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Keep It Real

(This poem is not a criticism of poetry nor the works of others. Introspection is a large theme in my writing. This poem is entirely about my own lifetime of writing, wondering if sometimes, as opposed to actually participating, I hid in poetry and thus lived vicariously and not outright. Hence the title: "Keep It Real.") Love to a sonnet should not be confined? even worse a spray of Free Verse, if leaving the Heart no true Beating-place: So, keep it real: let the Rose yet feel its scent rising above the page; and Rolling-hills and Watery-spills, such motion a Liquid-pen often stills—the soul one's victim when Writers' passions are little more than frills....

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Date: 12/23/2018 11:21:00 PM
I take your point, so we’ll expressed; but don’t be too hard on yourself. An image whether in paint or words is still a creation. The so-called ‘real world’ is not the only valid one. Should it outweigh all others?
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Joe Dimino
Date: 12/24/2018 7:08:00 AM
Hi Geoffrey, thank you for commenting. For sure! We could not think it, recognize it, were it not real on some level of experience. All thought has potential of becoming physical (in the usual sense) which is why it is wise for us to guard our thoughts and use imagination wisely. We are the genes of an Unlimited Creator.
Date: 10/24/2018 3:24:00 PM
So true; "Love to a sonnet should not be confined?"l excellent imagery in this piece, "keep it real: let the Rose yet feel its scent rising above the page;" love that.
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Date: 10/23/2018 8:22:00 AM
I think many hide in poetry.. It is subjective and you should do as your heart wills...Nice use of words here...
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/23/2018 8:51:00 AM
For sure; it may be natural, healthy process to do. There are worse places to hide. It may be, what we call physical creation, is a place where spirit hides, lives vicariously, until us owners are consciously evolved enough to exist outright.
Date: 10/22/2018 3:57:00 PM
Oh I love it. A fave. xomo!
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Joe Dimino
Date: 10/22/2018 9:08:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen; you made my day. Blessings!

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