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Keep Fighting Kid

When you have a paramount dream constantly unraveling before your consistently 
welling blue eyes; when your rest is ever halted by the never ending murmurs of 
abhorrent foes drowning your memories in a sea of won’ts; when you are able to 
obtain every hollow shell of life’s bitter-sweet sustenance rather than your heart’s 
true nourishment; when one moment filled with ten seconds of nightmare darkens 
all 86,400 seconds a day of light; when your climb to the summit is exponentially 
becoming steeper as your mind, body, and soul tremble beneath your infinitely 
encumbering past shame; when you risk your future on a game of pitch and toss 
and lose only to pick yourself back up and start again at your beginnings; when 
everyone becomes a mental trauma instead of a lending shoulder; when you feel 
destitute to be alone yet you keep pushing forward as if the whole world is in your 
corner; when you are consistently beaten down time and time again; then and only 
then may you see the potential GOD has bestowed upon you and proceed to 
conquer the challenge of living up to it.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/14/2016 6:17:00 PM
Chris Guaglianone, nicely penned. Enjoyed reading your thoughts and words today. **SKAT**
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Date: 8/5/2013 6:04:00 AM
You shouldnt stop writing... some people like to keep up with you
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Date: 5/16/2011 5:20:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Chris. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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Date: 5/13/2011 7:07:00 PM
Wonderful words... great inspiring piece luv.,.
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Date: 5/13/2011 1:49:00 PM
Very interesting and enjoyable narrative, Chris
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