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Katsushika Hokusai, The Great Wave off Kanagawa, circa 1832

your love ~ my muse
your voice ~ my prose
            s l i
                p
                     s    and sails in the sky ~
stroking the silhouette
             of
snow-kissed mountains,
mirroring memories
of moon-flames
seized like picturesque
       Polaroids of a spirit
that stands still &
                       firm 
held by the archived songs
of seaweed sentiments
where
mists of thoughts
                tiptoe
            t r a i l i n g
the skin and scales
of serpentine w a v e s
                        c l a w i n g
through the throat of nothingness
pressed in the
frozen
     salt of silence ~ 
mujo’s murmur
bathed in lucid blues,
like air of angst,
clouds of       t e
                      a
                    r      s

if only the wind could grasp
the water-weed wilderness
ebbing and flowing
         within this mind ~ 
for the heart 
      is a chaotic odyssey
ferrying footprints
                     in distress 
allowing the currents
          to be the sailor
beckoning and betraying
the seekers
in search of briny bliss
w e a v i n g  wishes
reweaving desires ~ 
            never settling ~
wicked, yet carved
with starry reveries
pushing and pulling
valves of the ocean
held in the cradle of
               endless hope...

but beneath the c r
                              a
                          s h
                                i n g crystals
&
cacophonous crests,
floats fragility ~
anchored in healing,
     drifting in hurt ~
an ephemeral effervescence
      an inescapable embrace
      breathing and b r e a t h l e s s 
unmoved by the
tempests of time…
as the sky recalls 
               the taste of tides
and the tide feels
     the pulse of the sky ~ 
 resilient &
           relentless
amidst the restless rhymes
           phantom phrases 
and the clamorous
   cadence of delicate life…
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Evangeline Avatar
June 26, 2025 at 8:40 PM
Oh, I have a shirt with this painting. I love it. Your poem makes it so romantic
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Nancy's remarks beneath mine are so true
Dietrich Avatar
June 7, 2025 at 3:18 PM
Love all the alliteration and internal rhyme I noticed. I don't know of this event. Or is this a famous painting? Anyway I really loved the phrase you used at the end showing the contrast of clamor with " delicate life"
Kaufman Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 2:37 PM
Dear Ink, I am in awe and greatly admirable of your amazing and disciplined word weaving skills. How on earth are you able to do this on a daily basis? It's amazing. Blessings to you and your wonderful gift.
Buhagiar Avatar
June 5, 2025 at 2:42 AM
A cascade of breath-taking sensations that weave imagery, rhythm, and emotion. You sculpted winds and waves, carrying echoes of forgotten dreams A poem that is mesmerizing. Brilliant as usual.
Winter Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 7:53 PM
Dear IE, as always, you're so brilliant. The romantic start is particularly heart touching and the way you've penned this poem is absolutely gorgeous. I really enjoyed reading this poem. Sending you love, Anne
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:06 PM
I appreciate your love and kindness beautiful soul. Thank you so very much always. Sending you light
Brul Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 5:55 PM
What a creative and unique interpretation of a work of art. You have given a new dimension on how we see this painting. This exphrasis rocks dear Ink! Big congratulations. A FAVe!!! Keep shining! ^___^ JCB
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:05 PM
Thank you so much kind soul, i appreciate your comment and fave too, you are always so kind. Grateful truly
Anaya Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 3:32 PM
Ah y e s! This is a famous art piece, IE "stroking the silhouette of snow-kissed mountains, mirroring memories of moon-flames seized like picturesque Polaroids of a spirit that stands still & firm" that snow-kissed mountain is not just any mountain, no, it's Mount Fuji! and it shows how huge the wave was on a scale. Beautiful like your poem dear poetess ~ Anaya
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:04 PM
Thank you yes mt fuji, was interesting to learn, i never knew this artist, and also i mention mujo, cus its related to the transcient nature of the wave, and concept of the art. Thank you for your visit and comment. Appreciate it
Rose  Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 2:58 PM
snow-kissed mountains, twice blessed, amidst the restless rhymes phantom phrases only you can resurrect, lovely Ink, just lovely !
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:00 PM
Thank you fragrant rose. Appreciate you always. Sending you light
One Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 11:46 AM
Interesting interpretation of this painting dear inky.... Romantic start to your poem with those opening lines of love and dedication with tones of loyalty and feeling lost without the one who makes your heart beat that little bit faster... A bit of a sidenote before I continue, I love how you format you poems with letters mixed up - its really creative like sprinkling water on flowers... I'm happy you have so many loyal supporters... Anyway back to your wonderful poem (where would the soup be without you?)
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:59 PM
I see your comment below about rumi, if anyone should learn about rumi they should talk to you.. thank you for your detailed comment, its just a wave of thoughts, iv been in rough seas so bad that i know sometimes thoughts can be all over the place when waves a ferocious. Also lol at sea weed interpretation hahah Appreciate always your support! And you did interpret it right even if you had to think a little deep
One Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 11:48 AM
Archived songs of seaweed sentiment that is interesting use of metaphor now... I'm trying to interpret what you mean.. but to me that sounds like wet and slimey songs.... interesting... There is a lot of hidden vulnerability in your poem and tender hurt... like wanting something, but you cannot have it.. letting go, but you can't and don't want to.. but feel you have no choice... but in reality, you do.... Your poetry always makes me think little Empress...
Hind Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 10:28 AM
Quite the poetry- again!!! You're always in tune with something out there, that's for sure. Excellence, dear Ink. <3
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:58 PM
Thank you sweet soul, i appreciate always your kindness. Sending you light always
Poet Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 7:58 AM
As always, your pen contains a hidden genius that puts the words into perspective. I like these lines, beneath the crashing crystals and cacophonous crests. Just gorgeous, and your alliteration and diction are unmatched. Excellently implemented! It's a pleasure to see your page today! Warm hugs!
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Thanking you always
Rhymes Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 6:17 AM
Polaroids of a spirit that stands still . Love this line
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Awwn thank you dahlin
Onpaper Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 4:44 AM
slips and sails in the sky stroking the silhouette of snow-kissed mountains, mirroring memories of moon-flames.. ooo look at these gorgeous alliterations.. through the throat of nothingness pressed in the frozen salt of silence.. chaotic odyssey ferrying footprints in distress .. uuugh um melting with the beauty of these flawless lines papi… taste of tides oooooo child!!! and the tide feels the pulse of the sky dayum that’s sexaaaay papi!! This piece just takes my breath away !!! Ur craftsmanship is an absolute masterpiece!!!
Empress Avatar
June 4, 2025 at 9:02 AM
Hahah you are so funny papi! Thank you!!!
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