Katrina

Nothing out of place
Just playful late summer breeze
A gentle warning...
For children often forget
That Mother has a temper
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:37 PM
wow, this is a cool one, Tim. Big congrats.
Brown Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in ~SKAT~'s "TANKA ME" contest Tim. What an honor to share placement with you. Love, Carol
Sweetheart Avatar
October 24, 2012 at 3:36 AM
CONGRATS TIM ON AN EXCELLENT VIVID WRITE AND WONDERFUL WIN LUV .. WE R EXPECTING 'SANDY' UP AND DOWN EAST COAST THIS WEEKEND LUV ..
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October 23, 2012 at 7:08 PM
TIM, congratulations with your "Tanka me this, Tanka me that, Tanka me any poem you want :-) LOL.... what a title.. Love it and enjoyed stopping by all my sisters tanka winners... good night... LUV~PD
Gasun Avatar
October 23, 2012 at 3:18 PM
Congratulations on your awesome win, Tim! hugs:)LG
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October 23, 2012 at 2:12 PM
T, Congrats on your win' luv * Siddy
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October 3, 2012 at 3:31 PM
Tim, soup-mail...xox~pd
Horsman Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 4:34 PM
A stark reminder, of the power of nature, Tim, hope folk are safe with Issac i believe the name is, in the same area. I like this in Tanka form.
Dufresne Avatar
August 30, 2012 at 4:17 PM
And how! in so many facets, Tim. Cool poem that brings us back to the facts of life and death.
B Avatar
August 28, 2012 at 5:40 PM
Hopefully they are more aware this time Tim. Well said, the fury of mother nature is wise to be wary of.
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August 28, 2012 at 3:53 PM
That hurricane unfortunately caught a lot of people living in New Orleans by surprise. It's been seven years now, but the victims still remember it vividly.
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