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Karmic Debt

On those flaming August nights when breezes lash around, as steam instantly ruffles outside the window, her breath pulses in their dwelling, roasted by the uproar of such voice draining all thoughts beyond reason... Hushed tones grow inert; allowing the turmoil, the pain, and anguish of words so cruel, they need not have been uttered in anger to castigate hearts weeping from a bitter vicious language over close kin's genial queries: and roots of karmic debt multiply, that consequences burn within her mind-- another unforgiving deed nailing harshness without a sign of remorse-- her pride's toll. Karma Contest sponsored by Line Gauthier 4/29/2018

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Date: 5/12/2018 9:26:00 AM
not really read a lot of dramatic verse thanks for sharing stephen like it
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:15:00 AM
What a powerful twist in the end. I like your choice of words-- there is no redeeming value for unrepenting souls.
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Date: 4/29/2018 9:00:00 AM
A potent offering which depicts the repercussions of negative karma. What comes around goes around.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:10:00 AM
The message in your poem... well said in these words: Hushed tones grow inert; allowing the turmoil, the pain, and anguish of words so cruel, they need not have been uttered. Well written, as always, nette..best for a win.
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Date: 4/29/2018 7:06:00 AM
An excellently penned piece, Nette!:-) Really enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest!
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Date: 4/29/2018 5:01:00 AM
A fantastic poem, enjoyed reading. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 4/29/2018 2:22:00 AM
Indeed, the consequences of the mouth driving off before the brain has been put into gear can be disastrous. A fine write, nette, good luck in the contest. Viv x
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