CayCay Godwin Poet Quatrain

KARMA

Before actions go around to come around,
all deeds ascend up that lessons descend down.
Such is the universe’s tried, true policy
as karma has deployed for all of history.

Whether conduct is good, bad or otherwise,
all human behavior meets heaven’s keen eyes.
If we say it, pray it, think it or do it,
it goes up, then down once karma reviews it.

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Jannie Breedt October 27, 2016 at 2:50 AM Intelligent and oh so profoundly wise. Out of which depth did you find this one? I cant imagine how you did it. Congratulations here

Cynthia Buhain-Baello March 20, 2016 at 9:48 PM Excellent piece on karma, concise but precise and perfect unity of thought.

Poet Destroyer A March 15, 2016 at 12:22 AM wonderful win CayCay, I'm now just catching up and checking out all the contest themes I missed this month. A huge congratulations. Love LINDA

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 9, 2016 at 12:45 AM Wonderful poetry here Caycay... congrats on big win.

James Inman March 8, 2016 at 9:51 AM Lovely write CayCay.

Susan Gentry March 7, 2016 at 7:42 PM Congratulations on your win! Like how you did this.

Sandra Haight March 7, 2016 at 6:52 PM Great poem, CayCay. Congratulations on your nice win in the 'what goes up, must come down' contest! Hugs, Sandra

Eve Roper March 7, 2016 at 2:45 PM CayCay, congratulations on the “What Goes Up, Must Come Down” contest a 7: ) Hugs Eve

Beautiful Scars March 7, 2016 at 12:40 PM CayCay, congrats on your placement in the contest, you have a very insightful mind pretty lady...:)-luloo *smiles*

Jan Allison March 7, 2016 at 12:37 PM wise words indeed CayCay congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Daver Austin March 1, 2016 at 2:06 PM Karma or no, this holds true in life. A great man once said,"No one gets away with anything." Good stuff. daver

Sandra Haight February 27, 2016 at 3:54 PM Such a great take on the theme, CayCay. Words of wisdom so nicely expressed in your poem. Best wishes for the contest! Hugs, Sandra

Andrea Dietrich February 27, 2016 at 3:53 PM You saw this one differently from me. I took it literally. (not posted it yet). Anyway, it's a keen observation, my friend. how are you doing today?

Connie Marcum Wong February 27, 2016 at 12:09 AM Oh yes, I so agree and I have noticed the higher you become vibrationally the faster it seems to occur. Nice, very nice CayCay! CayCay Godwin February 27, 2016 at 8:10 AM Hi, Connie - thank you so much for your comment. All the best, all the time ... CayCay

Walter T. Ashe February 26, 2016 at 9:24 PM Life's truth straight to the point! There's no beating around that bush!.....Write on CayCay!...Write on! CayCay Godwin February 26, 2016 at 9:32 PM Thank you, Walter - very much ... CayCay