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Kaput

~   done ... i kept trying


                         despite endless rejection ...


               (discouraged) ... u win.   ~


     :-(
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Hamilton Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 5:01 PM
Ummmm what does this mean? Doesn't sound like a poem...soupmail!
Barden Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:44 PM
Not a Poetry Soup thing, Brother, just a personal purge of sorts. Blessings, my friend - Soup Mail coming at ya! ;o)
Gauthier Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 4:42 PM
Indeed, Gregory. There are people simply not worth fighting.
Barden Avatar
October 3, 2019 at 8:43 PM
Amen, Line ... enough darkness in the world without looking for it, lol - blessings, Dear Poet! :o) <3
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