Kanhapatra - Win

Once upon a time there lived a dancer 
Shyama, a concubine of a feudal baron
Had a pretty girl Kanha, also a dancer
Quite excelled in playing of the Veena”s tune
Was mortified being Courtesan’s daughter
Sobbing, came to her mother with a question
Calming her down she pointed to God’s statue
HE is your soul-mate will take you away astute

She took to Lord Pandurangam thus advised
As her lover, owner of body, mind and soul
As the classical musician her she was praised
People came with offers, mother turned down all.
Sultan of Vidarbh by her beauty was charmed
Sent order to send Kanha to his serial
She left town at dawn as she had intimation
Went to Pandharpur temple for inspiration.


She wrote, composed and sang as blessed poet
Data was leaked when a man saw her singing
The Sultan besieged the town and held the priest
Quite engrossed she kept on Veena –playing
Chord broke, song disrupted, the statue split
God came out, carried her, the statue joining
Merged with God, piece of scarf stuck in a gap
Kanha got herself in her eternal lover wrap.

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Once upon a time in the fourteen century, at Mangalwedhe ,Maharashtra State, 
India, the story has taken place. A temple was built later, in Kanhapatra’s name. 
The lucky visitors, who strongly believe in Lord Vithal and his miracles, can see or 
assume the tiny piece of cloth, stuck (at the place near the heart) on the Lord’s statue.
                                                
Contest: Any poem # 3              6th place win
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*Name of a woman
** Kanha means a belle
*** Veena, an Indian musical instrument
****Pandurangam, a name of the Indian God
*****A feudal Lord of Ancient state Vidarbh of India
******Pandharpur name of the town where there is famous temple of the Lord 
Pandurangam
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Honorable mention
Contest: The ottowa Rima by Jared Pickett
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A  Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 6:33 PM
Hi Dr Ram, congratulations on your win.... SKAT
Anglesey Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 10:36 AM
I really enjoyed this magnificent spiritual piece...congratulations on your win :)
A   Avatar
September 4, 2013 at 8:08 AM
Dr Tam, , congratulations in Nathan's any poem contest... Linda
Muzzey Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 5:01 PM
Wonderful read, I enjoyed the history. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest. Caryl
Esquire Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, A Superb, Ottava Rima Good Luck YOUR Liege, ALWAYS...HG Dr. Ram, I forgot to ask You What Introspective POETRY is I did not put Introspective as a Form because I don't know what it is YOUR Liege ALWAYS LOVE. ..HG
Esquire Avatar
December 20, 2010 at 12:37 PM
Dear Dr. Ram, I can see YOU standing in the Top Winner's Circle I enjoy the Knowledge in YOUR educational Footnotes YOUR Liege, ALWAYS...HG
Kannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 4:22 PM
DEAR RAM wonderful rendition the soul once it seeks gets solace from the lord, immaterial of other materialistic around it gets absorbed with the lord you have brought about the moksha siddhi well here
Sweetheart Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 8:13 AM
SOUP MAIL..Dr. Ram.. thankxxx.. and Happy Holidays..
Poet Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:19 AM
I have just gone through this beautiful poetic story Dr. Mehta.Sorry I don't have any information regarding Kanhapatra.I am a Bengalee from Durgapur,West Bengal.Thank you for your comment on my poem.
Hickman Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 11:45 PM
truly a wonderful poetic story that was penned so precious and devoutly a wonderful and as you say true story to be handed down into the future for all,,,Thank You ever so much for your gracious and wonderful visits to my words and for your warm and generous wordsthat you leave behind,,blessings..Cecil
Villarosa Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 7:04 AM
India is truly blessed because of its great contribution to history and its culture raised to fame. This is a literature that has to be nourished. Very interesting to read, Dr. Ram. (^_^) Noel.
Ruebel Avatar
December 10, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Dear Dr. Mehta, This is one of my favorites! I am going to read this one to my Grand-daughter Thank you for this, simply beautiful As Always, Shar
Dietrich Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:48 PM
Cool thing you did, to incorporate this ancient story with the ottava rima challenge. Good luck with the contest, Dr.ram!
Dufresne Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 6:54 PM
thanks for the informative and educational write Dr Ram.
Neels Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 1:19 PM
A very interesting story Dr. Ram, you make this form look so easy.. Enjoyed it tonight, all the best for the contest
Maverick Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 12:08 PM
enjoyed this traditonel story Dr Ram.with much vivid imagrey.
R Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:03 AM
A very interesting story, dr. Ram. Thank you for sharing your great work! Hugs, Emilia
Brown Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:01 AM
It is the season to give thanks...I wish to thank you for your support and friendship this past year (2010) Dr.Ram. May you and yours have a wonderful Holiday Season and may the New Year (2011) bring you and yours good health, and may your hearts be overflowing with love and happiness. Love and blessings always, Carol
Kopp Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 7:40 AM
Very fun piece...I was truely engaged
Kendrick Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Excellent one..Great story..Good luck in the contest..Reads like a winner..Thanks for acknowledging my work this morn..Sara
Sweetheart Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 6:36 AM
Well this has to be the most magnificent poem I have ever read from u Dr. Ram.. the details and description so vividly portrayed in your lines.. the footnotes ..the explanation..make it an exciting entry for Jared... good luck my friend.. with luv..
Johnson Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 12:39 AM
A great poem Dr. Mehta. And thanks for the info. In my little poem "A New Love" I was trying to fool the reader. Love, Joyce
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December 8, 2010 at 1:24 PM
Dr. Mehta, I love how you creatively expressed this myth in your own words. What a fantastic story...leaves me wanting more. Thank you for giving us a piece of Indian culture. Lay
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December 8, 2010 at 11:08 AM
What an interesting story behind your poem, Dr. Ram! Thank you for sharing your culture with us. This was so enjoyable to read. Love, Carolyn
Bloomsfield Avatar
December 8, 2010 at 10:16 AM
I love myths and getting to know other cultures stories. .you got to my soft spot with this outstanding post. .I hope Jared can see this beauty and love it. .tmfvs!
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