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Kaliedoscope

Thinking of this girl who wanted to elope
Asking me, do you want to tie the knot
It felt like I was lost in this kaleidoscope                                            
Still I'd ask myself is she the one or not

Its like I have slipped down this slope 
And into the valley of death, I now rot
But trying the best that I can to cope
If I don’t go dool,ally and lose the plot

It felt like I was lost in this kaleidoscope
Their were many things between us a lot
But then, I could have been a bit of a dope 
Until gone, do we realise what we had got

Though there was a time I did have hope
I was happy as Larry, now it's sqidly sqott
And now all one seems to do is just mope
With the baggage I carry, me David Scott


Bits of this were fom a poem I wrote back in 2005
called where do I go from here another interpretation of
a past time with ex written june 2012..........................
INSPIERD BY FRIENDS GROUP CONVERSATIONS AT THESE TIMES
ITS HOW IT FELT AT TIMES iM SURE iVE MENTIONED IN ALOT 
OF MY OTHER WRITES  
this has been reedited as I felt over the place before
this time in better context which been trying to do with others
not i was trying t keep to a pattern also with words in between
to keep flow but still keep sense of what im talking about

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/27/2014 4:27:00 PM
I found this to be well put together, but, at times, truly a labor to read. You have a unique style that is addictive and always worth the time to read. Great work..... Jake
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Date: 4/29/2014 1:52:00 PM
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