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Kaleidoscopic Collab With Jo Enjoying the kaleidoscopic view, As the sky changes to a brilliant hue, Songbirds fly across the clouds to their home, As the azure becomes a salmon dome, Tangerine sun recedes slow from the scene, Entering demurely is the night queen, What a sight to behold is this sunset! Nothing's more kaleidoscopic as yet! When lightning struck, I began to quiver, Sparks run through a spiritual river, Nature’s le coup de foudre beam reveals, A blissful night light, self-love that which heals, Moonshine spits pink energy bolts captured, Life’s predicted divinity raptured, The source, a grand illusion within us? Optical tilt, gigajoule luminous!

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Date: 6/10/2023 10:07:00 AM
4th Place 10 syllable count/ gigajoule-3 syllables/ le coup de foudre-5 syllables Last Two Stanzas--I Am Collab With Jo Poetry Contest/ Sponsor: Joanna Daniel
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Date: 5/4/2023 9:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Anaya! I love the way you blend art, science and faith into a poem with the brilliance of lightning at night. Love the line "moonshine spits pink energy bolts." I think it is so important for women to see science and faith in the poetic art form - especially young women who are interested in STEM education. Wonderful done. Brilliant blessings to you. Thank you for this poem.
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Date: 5/4/2023 9:55:00 AM
Very important are the disciplines of science, technology, etc. and to have woven such in a poem wasn't as difficult as one would think, it came naturally. I am excited Sam, that you got it, I'm not sure too many did! Thank you, for your encouragement;)
Date: 5/3/2023 8:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. Have a blessed day..................
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Date: 5/3/2023 9:05:00 AM
Thank you, Paula for the congratulations!
Date: 5/2/2023 1:40:00 AM
Nice work, Anaya, congratulations:)
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Date: 5/2/2023 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Joanna. I enjoyed your contest, and am honored I'm on your list!
Date: 4/4/2023 10:32:00 PM
You have given a spiritual and philosophical dimension to the whole poem. Enjoyed the beautiful outcome of this great collaboration , dear Anaya !
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Date: 4/5/2023 8:40:00 AM
Valsa, this is true, that's the spin I put on it. Day fades, lightning strikes, a baptism. Thank you. These are holy days;)
Date: 4/3/2023 1:36:00 AM
Great thoughts and collaboration.
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Date: 4/3/2023 10:10:00 AM
Thank you, Victor!
Date: 4/2/2023 11:18:00 PM
Very nice!! I love the easy flow of this... I will be reading more.. your question am I in a seminar - no, I study on my own.. Our comforter, God's Spirit teaches and guide's me. I write what I hear the Spirit say... Thank you my new found friend!!! ??????????
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Date: 4/3/2023 10:09:00 AM
Thank you, James!

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