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Dahlias and daffodils dazzle as ice darts from the cold. Dram is kaleidoscopic as moods and thoughts collide. A rosy sun casts hues on the sky, mixing azure and gold. Scarlet engulfs the star as a veil that swirl and hide. The moon, garbed in a golden gown, glides in a gray sky. Mars and Venus soar and gems and rubies adorn high. Behind the flashing lights of a dragonfly, clouds sway. Dawn paints skies with crimson, fuchsia, and blue. The sun rises as aqueous gold, kindling its vivid hue. When a fresh day dawns in the pearl flakes of dew. A hazy horizon wanes in an abyss of gloom to unfold. Velvet cobwebs contrast, glimmer in a silver snide. Enhance the appeal of a green park where kids play. On a buoyant beach where the breeze barely blew. Written: March 09, 2023 1st place contest winner Writing Challenge - 'K' Words - Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD

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Date: 5/8/2023 12:18:00 PM
So vivid and colorful poem. Loved it Sotto.
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Date: 4/4/2023 6:12:00 AM
I have read your winner in Constance's contest and found it interesting. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
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Date: 4/3/2023 3:29:00 PM
Sotto, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
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Date: 3/15/2023 10:43:00 AM
Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win
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Date: 3/14/2023 12:04:00 PM
What a celebration of beauty! Congratulations on your top win.
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Date: 3/14/2023 7:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your top win , Dear Sotto... Impressed by the creation Well done.
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Date: 3/13/2023 8:58:00 PM
A melange of scenes reflecting kaleidoscopic colors ! Your poem is an amazing beauty ! Congratulations on your great win dear friend.
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Date: 3/13/2023 2:07:00 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 3/13/2023 12:40:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write/picture with all of your colors. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
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Date: 3/11/2023 7:08:00 PM
Lasaad, a beautiful poem with colorful imagery, best of luck in the contest!
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Date: 3/10/2023 9:42:00 AM
Kaleidoscopic as mood and thoughts collide… …mixing azure a gold… Velvet cobwebs… Excellent colourful! Gorgeous picture. Sure to win top.
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Date: 3/10/2023 8:23:00 AM
Wow, you amaze me everytime, love this
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Date: 3/10/2023 6:12:00 AM
- What beauty you describe, Las ... a colorful spectacle as far as the eye can see - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/10/2023 5:13:00 AM
A kaleidoscope of beautiful poetry Sotto, you are a phenomenal wordsmith. All the best poet pal ~ Belle
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Date: 3/10/2023 5:02:00 AM
Delightful symphony of words and colors throughout my friend. A FAVE from me for the splendor of imagery.
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Date: 3/10/2023 3:43:00 AM
A poetic celebration of beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! A Fave!
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Date: 3/9/2023 11:00:00 PM
This certainly fits the bill, kaleidoscopic extraordinaire!
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Date: 3/9/2023 8:11:00 PM
Quite a vivid picture you’ve painted here, SP ~ beautifully crafted. I’m sure this will do well in the contest
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