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Kaleidoscopic

Dahlias and daffodils dazzle as ice darts from the cold.
            Dram is kaleidoscopic as moods and thoughts collide.
A rosy sun casts hues on the sky, mixing azure and gold.
Scarlet engulfs the star as a veil that swirl and hide.
                        The moon, garbed in a golden gown, glides in a gray sky.
Mars and Venus soar and gems and rubies adorn high.
Behind the flashing lights of a dragonfly, clouds sway.
      Dawn paints skies with crimson, fuchsia, and blue.
            The sun rises as aqueous gold, kindling its vivid hue.
                        When a fresh day dawns in the pearl flakes of dew.
A hazy horizon wanes in an abyss of gloom to unfold.
            Velvet cobwebs contrast, glimmer in a silver snide.
      Enhance the appeal of a green park where kids play.
            On a buoyant beach where the breeze barely blew.

Written: March 09, 2023

1st place contest winner 

Writing Challenge - 'K' Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France

This poem form is the Fragmented Rhyme invented and Conceived by Constance La France. It has 14 lines with indentation, and a rhyme scheme, as follows: ABABCCCDDDABCD
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Narain Avatar
May 8, 2023 at 12:18 PM
So vivid and colorful poem. Loved it Sotto.
Kendrick Avatar
April 4, 2023 at 6:12 AM
I have read your winner in Constance's contest and found it interesting. Way to go. Thanks for sharing. Sara
La France Avatar
April 3, 2023 at 3:29 PM
Sotto, excellent writing and thank you for sharing your poem in my Writing Challenge congratulations !
May Avatar
March 15, 2023 at 10:43 AM
Very nicely penned Sotto, Congrats on your win
Schiavina Avatar
March 14, 2023 at 12:04 PM
What a celebration of beauty! Congratulations on your top win.
Congratulations on your top win , Dear Sotto... Impressed by the creation Well done.
George Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 8:58 PM
A melange of scenes reflecting kaleidoscopic colors ! Your poem is an amazing beauty ! Congratulations on your great win dear friend.
Andresen Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 2:07 PM
- Back with a congratulations, Las :) - hugs
Goldsmith Avatar
March 13, 2023 at 12:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful write/picture with all of your colors. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Kitchin Avatar
March 11, 2023 at 7:08 PM
Lasaad, a beautiful poem with colorful imagery, best of luck in the contest!
Dutta Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 9:42 AM
Kaleidoscopic as mood and thoughts collide… …mixing azure a gold… Velvet cobwebs… Excellent colourful! Gorgeous picture. Sure to win top.
McBride  Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 8:23 AM
Wow, you amaze me everytime, love this
Andresen Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 6:12 AM
- What beauty you describe, Las ... a colorful spectacle as far as the eye can see - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Edmonds  Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 5:13 AM
A kaleidoscope of beautiful poetry Sotto, you are a phenomenal wordsmith. All the best poet pal ~ Belle
Pandit Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Delightful symphony of words and colors throughout my friend. A FAVE from me for the splendor of imagery.
Trifiatis Avatar
March 10, 2023 at 3:43 AM
A poetic celebration of beauty, my dearest friend, Lasaad! A Fave!
Seeker Avatar
March 9, 2023 at 8:11 PM
Quite a vivid picture you’ve painted here, SP ~ beautifully crafted. I’m sure this will do well in the contest
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