Laura Leiser Poet Rhyme

Kaleidoscope of Abstract Hues

Astound me with visual auroras
swaths of rainbows in chorus
that leap across lofty skies
strange intriguing patterns that rise
iridescent visions of midnight forests.

Mind bending colors turn sinister 
haunting hues no longer minister
I awaken from dystopian dreams
seeking solace from simple means
I bask inside sunlight’s perimeter. 



Written on 3/17/2018

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John Hamilton April 14, 2018 at 4:44 PM Great imagery and word selection Laura, I see congrats are in order, nice win!!

Line Gauthier April 9, 2018 at 10:23 PM Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.

Gregory Richard Barden March 30, 2018 at 4:50 AM Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Laura - all the best to you, my friend! :-)

Susan Ashley March 23, 2018 at 5:11 PM Wow! Laura, your amazing and poetic lines are full of striking imagery and awesome rhymes! Just beautiful! Belated congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan

Sandra Haight March 21, 2018 at 6:56 PM Such lovely contrasting imageries conveyed in your poem, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra Laura Leiser March 21, 2018 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Sandra! I'm glad you liked this one! :)

Kim Rodrigues March 21, 2018 at 7:55 AM So many wonderful visuals! Love haunting hues no longer minister! Congrats, Laura! A fave! Laura Leiser March 21, 2018 at 8:19 PM Thank you, Kim! I'm glad you liked this enough to fave it, too! :)

Beautiful Scars March 21, 2018 at 5:57 AM such depth! lovely poem sweet Laura, thank you and congrats :)-luloo Laura Leiser March 21, 2018 at 8:18 PM Thank you for my placement in your contest, Laura Loo! I enjoyed writing for it :)

Andrea Dietrich March 19, 2018 at 3:00 PM wow, you blew that challenge out of the water. Awesome imagery!! Laura Leiser March 19, 2018 at 3:13 PM Thank you, Andrea! I'm so glad you liked this poem :)

Nette Onclaud March 18, 2018 at 6:00 PM beautiful strokes from your brush create a stunning visual in this poem... enjoyed much, laura.. huggs Laura Leiser March 19, 2018 at 3:14 PM Thank you, Nette! So glad you enjoyed this poem :)

Silent One March 18, 2018 at 9:34 AM Awesome imagery Laura, great rhymes.. I liked how you used the 5 words per line.. Laura Leiser March 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM Thanks, Silent! No particular words were needed in this contest. Just five words per line...glad you liked this one :)

Line Gauthier March 18, 2018 at 8:29 AM Love it, Laura. Laura Leiser March 18, 2018 at 3:38 PM Thank you, Line!

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2018 at 6:25 AM Super hues adorn your poem..well written and executed..best for a win, Laura. Laura Leiser March 18, 2018 at 3:38 PM Thanks, Vijay! :)

Viv Wigley March 18, 2018 at 2:30 AM Wow, your subconscious has quite a palette, laura. Best of luck with this super entry. Viv x Laura Leiser March 18, 2018 at 3:35 PM Thanks, Viv! Glad you enjoyed this one :)