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Kaleidoscope of Abstract Hues

Astound me with visual auroras swathes of rainbows in chorus that leap across lofty skies strange intriguing patterns that rise iridescent visions of midnight forests. Mind bending colors turn sinister haunting hues no longer minister I awaken from dystopian dreams seeking solace from simple means I bask inside sunlight’s perimeter. Written on 3/17/2018

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 4/14/2018 4:44:00 PM
Great imagery and word selection Laura, I see congrats are in order, nice win!!
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Date: 4/9/2018 10:23:00 PM
Back with well deserved congrats, Laura.
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Date: 3/30/2018 4:50:00 AM
Blessings and sincere congratulations on your fine win, Laura - all the best to you, my friend! :-)
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Date: 3/23/2018 5:11:00 PM
Wow! Laura, your amazing and poetic lines are full of striking imagery and awesome rhymes! Just beautiful! Belated congratulations on your wonderful win. ~Susan
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Date: 3/21/2018 6:56:00 PM
Such lovely contrasting imageries conveyed in your poem, Laura. Congratulations on your fine placement in the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! I'm glad you liked this one! :)
Date: 3/21/2018 7:55:00 AM
So many wonderful visuals! Love haunting hues no longer minister! Congrats, Laura! A fave!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2018 8:19:00 PM
Thank you, Kim! I'm glad you liked this enough to fave it, too! :)
Date: 3/21/2018 5:57:00 AM
such depth! lovely poem sweet Laura, thank you and congrats :)-luloo
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/21/2018 8:18:00 PM
Thank you for my placement in your contest, Laura Loo! I enjoyed writing for it :)
Date: 3/19/2018 3:00:00 PM
wow, you blew that challenge out of the water. Awesome imagery!!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/19/2018 3:13:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I'm so glad you liked this poem :)
Date: 3/18/2018 6:00:00 PM
beautiful strokes from your brush create a stunning visual in this poem... enjoyed much, laura.. huggs
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/19/2018 3:14:00 PM
Thank you, Nette! So glad you enjoyed this poem :)
Date: 3/18/2018 9:34:00 AM
Awesome imagery Laura, great rhymes.. I liked how you used the 5 words per line..
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, Silent! No particular words were needed in this contest. Just five words per line...glad you liked this one :)
Date: 3/18/2018 8:29:00 AM
Love it, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thank you, Line!
Date: 3/18/2018 6:25:00 AM
Super hues adorn your poem..well written and executed..best for a win, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2018 3:38:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay! :)
Date: 3/18/2018 2:30:00 AM
Wow, your subconscious has quite a palette, laura. Best of luck with this super entry. Viv x
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/18/2018 3:35:00 PM
Thanks, Viv! Glad you enjoyed this one :)

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