Juxtaposition


Surrealistic impulses
create songs impositions
upon the sphere of
evening coincidences
that beckon truth
beyond the scope
of reality as
you finally realize 
that to some
it's just a problem
upon their realm
of personal satisfaction
Inter-relationships surface
amidst the turmoils
of daily excursions
siphoned through kaleidoscopic
determinations that have
no basis in justice
but are constructed
amidst contemporary delineations
that stifle happiness
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June 14, 2024 at 11:26 AM
Food for thought. Can I just piggy back on SO's thoughtful comment? I mean... he analysed it so well. Kaliedoscopic... interesting. Never seen it used that way, but I love the word itself. Thank you for your visit to my page.
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June 14, 2024 at 11:22 AM
Your poem uses rich, surreal imagery to explore deep philosophical themes. It juxtaposes the mystical with the mundane, highlighting the contrast between personal perception and societal imposition. The language is evocative and thought-provoking, inviting readers to reflect on their own experiences of reality and satisfaction.
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