Juxtaposed

~~~~~~~~~~~ "Sky's eyebrows white on blue juxtaposed... tears wave to wash away pain on cue" ~~~~~~~~ ~JSLambert © 2012 Poet TreeZ Publishing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 5/25/2012 5:22:00 AM
ooooh yes.....love this poem - short but says it so concise - Shaz
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Date: 2/23/2012 12:09:00 AM
Good one JS. I like the word "JUXTAPOSED". Hell, I like any word that makes me grab my dictionary. But if it was me though, since you're using the sky, I would have written, "Dark clouds roll - and wash away - pain on cue". But that's just me. Good job. :-) Rockman
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:58:00 PM
I like this JS muxt look up juxtaposed though and thank you for your lovely comment about the unicorn I am still laughing xx
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Date: 2/22/2012 11:10:00 PM
Howdy!
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Date: 2/19/2012 7:04:00 AM
JSL.... "tears wave" very well constructed image! jimbo
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Date: 2/18/2012 10:26:00 PM
clever creation of imagery and a fantastic view JS.. amazing being lost in these words .. a treasure luv.. so good to hear from u again.. ,y hubby is doing all my typing so taking longer to respond lately.. forgive please.. luv..
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