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Juxtaposed

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"Sky's eyebrows
white on blue
juxtaposed...
tears wave to
wash away
pain on cue"
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~JSLambert © 2012 Poet TreeZ Publishing

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Shaz Cheesman

May 25, 2012 at 5:22 AM

ooooh yes.....love this poem - short but says it so concise - Shaz

Rockman Pritts

February 23, 2012 at 12:09 AM

Good one JS. I like the word "JUXTAPOSED". Hell, I like any word that makes me grab my dictionary. But if it was me though, since you're using the sky, I would have written, "Dark clouds roll - and wash away - pain on cue". But that's just me. Good job. :-) Rockman

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

February 22, 2012 at 11:58 PM

I like this JS muxt look up juxtaposed though and thank you for your lovely comment about the unicorn I am still laughing xx

Jslambert Mister Roboto

February 22, 2012 at 11:10 PM

Howdy!

James Marshall Goff

February 19, 2012 at 7:04 AM

JSL.... "tears wave" very well constructed image! jimbo

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

February 18, 2012 at 10:26 PM

clever creation of imagery and a fantastic view JS.. amazing being lost in these words .. a treasure luv.. so good to hear from u again.. ,y hubby is doing all my typing so taking longer to respond lately.. forgive please.. luv..

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