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Juvenal Spring - Anacreontic Verse

It's spring time
with its budding
buds and peeping
leafies creeping
out from their cosy
axils in the stems.
Fresh fragrance
smears the air
with the early blooms
smiling away,
wooing willing hearts
waking from the bleak
of winter cold.
Juvenal-
the whiff of youth,
fresh sap coursing
red ichor infused with 
a redder red
as life itself
equates to thrill
and  being alive.
Welcome, Spring-
dawn of life re-defined.

09 April 2016
Anacreontic Verse 3 - Poetry Contest by Edward Ebbs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 4/27/2016 10:41:00 AM
Very beautiful, Karam! Your lovely imagery gives spring a feeling of fresh youth and a joy to be alive. Congratulations on a most worthy win! ~ Regards // paul
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/27/2016 11:02:00 AM
Thank you, Paul.
Date: 4/11/2016 11:20:00 AM
wow, one of the best in the contest, I'd say. I really like your creativity on this one.
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Date: 4/11/2016 12:26:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea.
Date: 4/9/2016 10:55:00 AM
Beautiful imagery Karam - do check the final line I make it 6 syllables:-) hugs jan xx
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/9/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You are right about the 6 syllables in the last line - there was a toss-up between "defined" and "re-dwfined" - I chose the latter.
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/9/2016 12:27:00 PM
Thank you, Jan. You are right about the 6 syllables in the last line - there was a toss-up between "defined" and "re-dwfined" - I chose the latter.
Date: 4/9/2016 8:44:00 AM
Beautifully written Karam...enjoyed
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Karam Misra
Date: 4/9/2016 12:28:00 PM
Thank you, JM.

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