Jusy Hold Me- a Collaboration With Eileen Manassian


Just Hold Me
She: 	
Just hold me here close to your heart 
Let me stay tranquil a while 
This world has wrested my joy away 
And has robbed me again of my smile

He:
I will hold you forever, part of my soul 
To linger with me until time’s end 
I will bring the joy back to your life 
Your beautiful smile will transcend 

She: 
Just keep me here secure in your arms 
Blissful and unaware of the strife 
There are those around who wish me harm 
Be Protector of my heart and life

He:
Forever I keep you safe in my arms 
Within my soul you shall dwell 
A refuge from the pain of the world 
My love shield, your fear will dispel 


She: 
Calm and soothe me, please, cherish me
And in this haven, let me rest
There is sweetness that here abides
When I am pressed close to your chest

He:
In silent embrace our hearts are one 
Find in me comfort and surcease of soul 
My love shall buoy you through every storm 
As our love the Angels extol




My dearest Enchantress thank you for allowing me to add my pen to your beautiful words. Your heart as always shows through what you write with your quill of gold.
all my love Shane ***

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 3/30/2015 8:26:00 AM
This is a wonderful collaboration, I enjoyed this romantic interlude.
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Date: 3/17/2015 7:25:00 AM
Tastefully composed, Eileen and Shane! I think both of your beautiful hearts shine through in the piece! Happy St Patrick's Day! "May your blessings outnumber The shamrocks that grow, And may trouble avoid you Wherever you go. ~Irish Blessing Best wishes....Mikki
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/19/2015 1:26:00 AM
Mikki my wonderful friend how lovely of you to take a dip in my little pond. Thank you for your kind words and the irish blessing it is so sweet. Writing with Eileen was very special, also a little daunting, I love her poetry so much and I was afraid I would let her down. I have missed speaking with you lately send me a mail if you have time to chat. love Shane xxx your
Date: 3/10/2015 12:06:00 PM
Beautiful flow Eileen and Shane a great collaboration:-) Hugs Jan xx 7 xx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/11/2015 4:51:00 PM
Thanks Ninja Naj, It really was great fun writing with Eileen she has so much talent. love Shane xxx
Date: 3/10/2015 11:20:00 AM
Wow a beautiful collab Shane and Eileen... a 7+... nad!
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/11/2015 4:44:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words, and an appology for taking so long to get back to you. love Shane xxx
Date: 3/10/2015 4:19:00 AM
- I'm not sure if I gave you my 7 ....... here comes my 7 !!!!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/10/2015 4:26:00 AM
- I'm in the same "boat" :)) .......... much to do and much to think about, my old father is sick... he lives will soon be over :(
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/10/2015 4:22:00 AM
Thank you again my dear friend. I have to say also that Eileen is a wonderful poetess to write with, her words are like gold. Stay safe. love Shane xxx
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Shane Cooper
Date: 3/10/2015 4:20:00 AM
Thank you Anne-Lise, I am sorry that I have not visited your page or mailed for a while, i just seem to not have enough hours in the day. That is a reason not an excuse, I do appreciate your input into my work and thank you again dearly my friend. love Shane xxx
Date: 3/10/2015 4:15:00 AM
- Dear Shane what beautiful and romantic collaboration with Eileen - I enjoy reading it! - A clear and large 7 to both - I wish you a lovely day !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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