Justice League Is Major

Sure i hit hard, always shining like a star, i carry more pain than any man
I'm half metal, I'm prt metal too ever since I was knee high
Trust me i learned early, 11 mnths. i was walking and stomping by then

May i remind you I'm remaining silent, like Mirinda rights
... how she fixes things
And i tell you i still hit good with the pain 
And i know your blonde hair and your blue eyes
And I know the clue coming from Spain

Like I was nuesas, like I couldnt even respond to that comment - man!
And she's a diamond sparkling in my eye's when i tell her this
If I was'nt half metal I'd be hooked on that thing, still hooked

LIke them juices what you gonna do?
And your breast they're well formed I knew GOD knew what He was doing
And your face, let's just say that,  God gave you something to touch my mind with

I'm telling you it would be a pleasure just to be in a presence of a Beauty well
Like she was in the Palace, and The Princess, like she needed a KNight in Shining Armour
Like I was A-fraid, and THe ARMY be the Sword in my hand you bastard
And the dragon I be chasing after him, boy I ain't scared 
Bits and pieces of my song Justice league
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 4/26/2013 10:38:00 AM
powerful poem,Tim, like this a lot....
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Date: 4/21/2013 8:24:00 PM
Hello Tim, how are you... as for me, I am doing fine... about your poem... very magnetizing. love the part of you remaining silent, like Mirinda rights.... an excellent poem... Linda
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