Justice

Everything seems more life-sized than normal today, and the air is perfumed with justice. Comradery defines America, as tears of relief roll down our cheeks. The sky is bluer, the grass is greener and people are smiling on the streets. We fought, we journeyed , we won. (by Kristen Bruni for Brian Strands As It Is Contest)

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2011 6:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win with this fine entry...Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 10:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Kristen. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/6/2011 9:03:00 PM

Kristen,this is just wonderful. A well deserved win. Congratulations.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2011 3:14:00 PM

Congrats Kristen on your big win in Brian's cool contest ... enjoy your top spot with luv.. for excellence my friend..

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 5/5/2011 1:43:00 PM

Not a big winners list but still a pleasure to sitting in it with you!! luv Michael

Edwin Baldwin

Date: 5/5/2011 11:01:00 AM

Justice is served in a court of law, by a preponderance of the evidence, not by the media, with no evidence. That's not justice its called murder of the innocent.. no matter what you're taught to believe of them.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/3/2011 5:19:00 AM

I enjoyed reading your wonderful poetry this morning Kristen. I will be back again soon to read more and I wish you the best in Brian's contest.. May the sun shine down on you and bring great joy to your life now and always. Love, Carol

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/2/2011 7:51:00 PM

Interesting perspective on bin Laden's death, Kristen. Best wishes in Brian's contest. Carolyn

Nebeolisa Okwudili

Date: 5/2/2011 6:24:00 PM

Beautiful poem, Kristen. I like the long ee sound and the serene environment you created