Justice

justice sweats under its weight- an asthmatic laboring for its  breath

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Terry Miller

December 11, 2023 at 12:58 AM

very profound and so well written; congratulations

Silent One

December 8, 2023 at 9:38 AM

This was a deep one..Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Sotto Poet

November 29, 2023 at 7:36 AM

Valsa, your one-liner is truly captivating and profound. The depth and potency of your message are both thought-provoking and soul-stirring.

Silent One

November 28, 2023 at 11:38 AM

Very interesting and deep one liner dear poet.. will take time to process this one...

Ink Empress

November 28, 2023 at 6:59 AM

This is so deep and powerful what you’ve conveyed here in few syllables dear valsa. Thought provoking and soul hitting. I love your wordplay here and how it flows too. Justice a subject that we can talk about in many ways and you’ve done that very well and the word “ asthmatic “ adds on to the strength of this piece, goodluck if this is for the contest