Get Your Premium Membership

Just You and Me and the Moon

~ Solitude soothes on this chilly winter evening along a drowsy lake just you and me and the moon, watching ripples upon the water playfully reflect the wonders of a night sky I find your January lips and as we kiss the heat of a thousand campfires flows through my body, melting me into your arms while fern leaf shadows silently blush A pine tree canopy allows twinkling stars to peek quietly between a mosaic of wind woven branches, as soft breezes whisper nature’s love songs gently upon our skin We sit amidst this tranquil serenity, gazing into each other’s eyes, feeling our hearts beat in harmonic rhythm with graceful mesmeric waves kissing the shore, falling in love all over again… just you and me and the moon ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 2/7/2020 9:22:00 PM
Wonderful!
Login to Reply
Date: 1/8/2020 6:47:00 AM
I love this romantic beauty Chris. That is what nature inspires. I am putting this into my Faves! : ) xxoo
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/8/2020 8:01:00 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for always showing me such kindness.
Date: 1/7/2020 11:17:00 AM
An astounding love poem - brilliant write, Blessings, Jennifer.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/7/2020 11:44:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this.
Date: 1/6/2020 8:25:00 PM
Romantic!
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/7/2020 8:17:00 AM
Thank you Kim.
Date: 1/6/2020 4:40:00 PM
Beautiful imagery. This is really sweet.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 4:41:00 PM
Thank you so very much Juliet
Date: 1/6/2020 2:30:00 PM
What amazing imagery you have given us, Chris. The power of romance in this poem is incredible. Especially love those "January Lips." Nothing warms a person up faster than a romantic evening. Women need more men like you, Chris. Hope you had a great holiday season. Hugs, Carolyn
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 4:01:00 PM
Thank you so very much Carolyn. What a nice thing to say.
Date: 1/6/2020 2:07:00 PM
- A truly harmonic rhythm ... of love and romance ... beautifully, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 2:09:00 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise.
Date: 1/6/2020 1:39:00 PM
As I've heard this said before elsewhere, this is sigh-worthy... just you and me and the moon <~ a wonderful ending/beginning. A fave for me, my friend.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 2:08:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend. It is so nice to see you again. I appreciate your kind words always.
Date: 1/5/2020 5:57:00 PM
I can only read in awe, as all the other comments suggest. Another beautifully crafted gem Chris. Ron
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thanks Ron for all of your kind thoughts and words. They are greatly appreciated my friend.
Date: 1/4/2020 10:58:00 PM
'the heat of a thousand moons...fern leaf shadows blush...' Unforgettable turns of phrases --- par for your course, O Poet! Thanks for the treat, Chris. Best always, Gershon
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you GW
Date: 1/4/2020 5:27:00 AM
Chris, another gorgeous enchanting romantic poem, love it! :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:24:00 AM
Thank you Tania so very much. I am thrilled you liked this one.
Date: 1/4/2020 12:25:00 AM
This love poem is beautiful and would make anyone wish to be at that lake sharing love in a special everlasting way. :)
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:23:00 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your comments are always so uplifting and encouraging.
Date: 1/3/2020 7:31:00 PM
The title alone is enticing, Chris, reminds of the many times my husband took me up on the woods, his love. Your thoughts are like seeing him again that is how he always felt.
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you so much Eve. Happy this one has brought some wonderful memories back to you.
Date: 1/3/2020 7:05:00 PM
sigh...each time i read one of your romantic poems i think you can't top that one and then you pen another even more beautiful than one would think possible... the scenes you create just carry the readers away into the beauty and passion of the moment... what an exquisite write ...a wow poem for sure... Goodnight Chris... have a wonderful weekend!!! hugs
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:22:00 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your comment humbles me today. Your kind words always bring a huge smile to me face. As always, I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 1/3/2020 5:37:00 PM
a romantic gem indeed Chris I so love your poems as I find it writing poetry like yours so difficult i am much more comfortable with humour:-) hugs Jan xx
Login to Reply
Green Avatar
Chris Green
Date: 1/6/2020 9:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Jan for always being so kind to me.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things