Just You and Me and the Moon

~

Solitude soothes
on this chilly winter evening
along a drowsy lake
just you and me
and the moon,
watching ripples
upon the water
playfully reflect the
wonders of a night sky

I find your January lips
and as we kiss 
the heat of a 
thousand campfires 
flows through my body,
melting me into 
your arms while 
fern leaf shadows 
silently blush

A pine tree canopy
allows twinkling stars
to peek quietly
between a mosaic
of wind woven branches,
as soft breezes
whisper nature’s
love songs gently
upon our skin

We sit amidst this
tranquil serenity,
gazing into each other’s eyes,
feeling our hearts beat
in harmonic rhythm
with graceful mesmeric
waves kissing the shore,
falling in love 
all over again…

just you and me
and the moon

~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Dhami Avatar
February 7, 2020 at 9:22 PM
Wonderful!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 8, 2020 at 6:47 AM
I love this romantic beauty Chris. That is what nature inspires. I am putting this into my Faves! : ) xxoo
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January 8, 2020 at 8:01 AM
Thank you so very much Connie for always showing me such kindness.
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January 7, 2020 at 11:17 AM
An astounding love poem - brilliant write, Blessings, Jennifer.
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January 7, 2020 at 11:44 AM
Thank you so much my friend. I am happy you enjoyed this.
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January 6, 2020 at 8:25 PM
Romantic!
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January 7, 2020 at 8:17 AM
Thank you Kim.
Ligon Avatar
January 6, 2020 at 4:40 PM
Beautiful imagery. This is really sweet.
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January 6, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Thank you so very much Juliet
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January 6, 2020 at 2:30 PM
What amazing imagery you have given us, Chris. The power of romance in this poem is incredible. Especially love those "January Lips." Nothing warms a person up faster than a romantic evening. Women need more men like you, Chris. Hope you had a great holiday season. Hugs, Carolyn
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January 6, 2020 at 4:01 PM
Thank you so very much Carolyn. What a nice thing to say.
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January 6, 2020 at 2:07 PM
- A truly harmonic rhythm ... of love and romance ... beautifully, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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January 6, 2020 at 2:09 PM
Thank you so very much Anne-Lise.
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January 6, 2020 at 1:39 PM
As I've heard this said before elsewhere, this is sigh-worthy... just you and me and the moon <~ a wonderful ending/beginning. A fave for me, my friend.
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January 6, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Thank you so much my friend. It is so nice to see you again. I appreciate your kind words always.
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January 5, 2020 at 5:57 PM
I can only read in awe, as all the other comments suggest. Another beautifully crafted gem Chris. Ron
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January 6, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thanks Ron for all of your kind thoughts and words. They are greatly appreciated my friend.
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January 4, 2020 at 10:58 PM
'the heat of a thousand moons...fern leaf shadows blush...' Unforgettable turns of phrases --- par for your course, O Poet! Thanks for the treat, Chris. Best always, Gershon
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January 6, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thanks so much my friend. I appreciate you GW
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January 4, 2020 at 5:27 AM
Chris, another gorgeous enchanting romantic poem, love it! :)
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January 6, 2020 at 9:24 AM
Thank you Tania so very much. I am thrilled you liked this one.
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January 4, 2020 at 12:25 AM
This love poem is beautiful and would make anyone wish to be at that lake sharing love in a special everlasting way. :)
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January 6, 2020 at 9:23 AM
Thank you so very much my friend. Your comments are always so uplifting and encouraging.
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January 3, 2020 at 7:31 PM
The title alone is enticing, Chris, reminds of the many times my husband took me up on the woods, his love. Your thoughts are like seeing him again that is how he always felt.
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January 6, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you so much Eve. Happy this one has brought some wonderful memories back to you.
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January 3, 2020 at 7:05 PM
sigh...each time i read one of your romantic poems i think you can't top that one and then you pen another even more beautiful than one would think possible... the scenes you create just carry the readers away into the beauty and passion of the moment... what an exquisite write ...a wow poem for sure... Goodnight Chris... have a wonderful weekend!!! hugs
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January 6, 2020 at 9:22 AM
Thank you Sandy. Your comment humbles me today. Your kind words always bring a huge smile to me face. As always, I appreciate you my friend.
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January 3, 2020 at 5:37 PM
a romantic gem indeed Chris I so love your poems as I find it writing poetry like yours so difficult i am much more comfortable with humour:-) hugs Jan xx
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January 6, 2020 at 9:20 AM
Thank you so much Jan for always being so kind to me.
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