Just Wondering

You know
There are times when I wonder
There are more times I blunder
In this grand stage, with tomorrow
I turn yesterdays page
And write another passage in my life
Another twisted attempt at sanity
Another stab at freedom
One more try at understanding
Instead of reprimanding
Plain and simple
Pure and true
Everyday is getting hard to see through
Everyday is just what it is, another day
Someone dies by another’s hand
Someone’s raped, mutilated, mugged, murdered
Ripped off, pissed on, pissed off
Sliced, diced, cut, quartered, canned and killed
Did I miss anything ?
Probably more than I care to know
Isn’t anyone bored with death yet
It’s been done, many times over
Or are we shooting for overkill
Who knows
I know that nobody cares, as long as it doesn’t affect them
How can you ignore this chaos
How can you not see this madness before you
Do you feel helpless ?
Are you helpless ?
Hopeful, hopeless, pathetic or a predator
A doer or a done over, a loser or a lifer
Look at your story and see if you want it to be told
I fear for the world and the judgment that awaits all of us

Eric (and sometimes not)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 4/28/2018 2:05:00 PM
Really great write and propagate very thoughtful message!
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Date: 4/28/2018 4:00:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words it means a great deal to me
Date: 11/29/2009 9:34:00 AM
I like to challenge people to think it keeps them alive. Thank you James
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Date: 11/29/2009 9:23:00 AM
Leaves the reader pondering on their thoughts and for their tomorrow >> James
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Date: 10/9/2009 10:40:00 AM
Eric - congrats on being featured this week..great write. Love Janette
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Date: 10/9/2009 2:54:00 AM
Eric, congrats on being featured this week...Raul
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Date: 10/5/2009 11:15:00 AM
Congratulations on your feature poem this week >> James
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Date: 10/5/2009 7:45:00 AM
Such a provocative poem, and well deserving this featured place this week. congratulations! ~ Carrie
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Date: 10/5/2009 3:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Eric. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/15/2009 1:12:00 PM
Thank you for your comments Sue, I find it interesting that you don't believe in any judgment. May I ask what exactly it is that you do believe? I'm curious.
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Date: 8/15/2009 12:02:00 PM
Awesome writing here, Eric. I don't believe in any "judgment" to come ... plant a tree ... you'll feel good again ... smile ...
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:30:00 PM
Tyesha do you see the similarities in both of our writings or is it just me ? I read your poems and say to myself that's something I would write. Thank you for words and please keep reading there will be more on the way.
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Date: 1/8/2009 9:19:00 PM
I am really enjoying your poetry, they all tell a story that most all of us can relate to and understand, I think we all feel beneath ourselves sometimes, we wonder if we've made the right decisions, other times we regret what we couldn't go back and change instead of trying to make the present a little better. Why wallow in pity or would ifs, thank god for everyday, and enjoy it because you don't know when your time is up. Excellent write* Tyesha
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