Home » Poems » Harry Horsman » Just Where We Are

Just Where We Are

To stand in your love emotions truly enriched your lips upon mine hold on to what we have now, oh if we could alter time. © Harry J Horsman 2013

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/18/2013 1:33:00 PM

I am now going to go look for more of your works, you write with heart. I like that, no better than like, I love how you put things into heartfelt images. Robert Henry Poulin.

Roberthenry Poulin

Date: 8/18/2013 1:31:00 PM

I love your poem: To stand in your love (usually tanka and haiku poets always use the first line as the poem title) Your lines 4 and 5 bring the poem together and give it sweet sadness. Harry, it is a beautiful very well constructed tanka worthy of an award and the way tanka should be.Very nice emotion. I like it much. Robert Henry Poulin

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/12/2013 9:27:00 AM

Yes indeed! I think at one point in anyone else's life, we do hope that we could alter time-- wonderfully said and romantic in a bit of melancholic way... very beautiful harry! Thank you for passing by and i am glad you enjoyed that tropical sunset...

Karen Anglesey

Date: 6/11/2013 6:43:00 PM

I felt a little romantic flutter ... very nice :)

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 6/11/2013 5:38:00 PM

aah Harry you have us ladies sighing so romantic love it Shadow x

Eileen Manassian

Date: 6/11/2013 3:27:00 PM

How awesome is this, Harry! Absolutely fabulous! You are such a romantic soul. Thanks for your visits to my work. Always great to hear from you! :)

Wilma Neels

Date: 6/11/2013 12:35:00 PM

Harry, I absolutely love this Tanka of yours. How have you been? Haven't been on the soup for a while so nice to read you again. Take care ; ) Wilma

Bl Devnath

Date: 6/11/2013 12:06:00 PM

You are very young all the time my sweet friend. This wonderful poem is filled with full of romance. Loved always, bl

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/11/2013 12:02:00 PM

this sentimental mood awes me, harry... lovely in al ways... shine on!..:) huggs

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 6/11/2013 10:25:00 AM

Put my name under the previous two harry, just love it xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/11/2013 10:01:00 AM

- I can write my name under Charma's comment .... agree with her. - Beautiful Harry! - Loove sweet Love!! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/11/2013 7:43:00 AM

I love all poems that you pen Harry but nothing as beautiful as your romantic ones.A very sensual and beautiful tanka.-Charma