Just When I Saw You

I thought everything's alright;
My decision I hold it tight.
It started just a simple crush,
Now I'm feeling on a crash.
Years ago I made this vow;
Not to look at you again to break this vow.
I pray to God this feeling will perish;
Pure luck admonish!
Coz years ago I feel freedom,
From the cage which serves as our kingdom.
But just looking' into your eyes;
I froze like an eyes,
Just when I saw you again, ridiculously;
My heart pump wildly!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
December 25, 2024 at 12:01 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 24, 2016 at 6:34 PM
awesome poem, Sheradmarie. LINDA
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January 16, 2016 at 4:55 PM
SHERADMARIE SERAD,,, enjoyed reading the words you poured on your poem. Have a wonderful day. **SKAT**
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November 27, 2012 at 7:42 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you this morning Shera. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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