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Just Wading

Last year I got into trouble; It was certain my digits would double! "Eighty-seventh time!" Meant stop, that's the line! Now my clear upper limit's a puddle!

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Robert Gorelick

Date: 8/21/2022 6:30:00 PM

Elizabeth, quite sagacious, keep it up! Robert

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/29/2022 3:45:00 AM

Thank you, Robert! I really appreciate your interest. Elizabeth

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 8/19/2022 10:43:00 PM

Oh well guess a limit is put on all our activities as we mature, i had a smile reading your last line, clever limerick Lizzy. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/20/2022 4:03:00 PM

I'm sorry. That sounded dismissive, not what I meant. Just how to get people to understand... Elizabeth

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/20/2022 3:26:00 PM

Thank you for commenting, Jennifer. It made me have a look at you work. My gosh! What an ouvre! Your poem on the environment is stunning, should be printed on the back of grocery slips or something to get the message across. Elizabeth

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/17/2022 6:41:00 PM

That last line set me to laughing like crazy. Great limerick, Elizabeth. :)

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 8/20/2022 3:26:00 PM

Always count on you for a laugh, Mr. Wolf! Eliz.