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Just Visiting While my visiting days are over, I am left with another gift, Fantasizing as a butterfly Landing softly on a cruise ship. I don’t drive down the Texas highways, Where once bluebonnets thrilled, Though in my mind I still see them, Spreading on a hill. A visit to my daughter is two-fold foiled, For planes just cost too much money, And she has steps from which I recoil, But she flies to me, that honey. Look I toward visits to a grocery store, Fresh faces, bright colors and such, I visit the world in my head these days, In a chair, with a cane, and no not even a crutch. **** Other Visits Not to be morbid, but I visit old family friends, Those gone to me now, always present in my heart, In a quiet moment on the deck under rustling trees, I can visit a face, two or three, make a party. We can remember the silly things we did, To soften the griefs or stress we all bore, And when we were sharing parenthood, Hoping the children would land safely on adulthood's shore. We shop now and then on a day trip, Stop in at some little bistro on the way, A visit posthumously to my old friends, Can pass a piece of the day.

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Date: 9/27/2019 10:15:00 PM
i love these kinds of visits...love visits with nature too...sometimes my sister and i go together on what she calls ghost hunts...we go to all the houses we knew as children...we walked up to our grandmothers, we wanted to ask if we could walk in the yard and sit under the fruit tree but we thought twice... another fine poem :) hugs
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/28/2019 10:18:00 AM
Oh, Sandra, how I wish I could have had my baby sister a while longer. She died in 2008, and oh, how I miss her. Thank you for your reply and your story.
Date: 9/25/2019 10:46:00 AM
Lovely visits my friend...one day we may encounter each other...hope all is good Sunlite...take care...sending poetic love & hugs...^WW^ :o)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 9:59:00 AM
Thank you for reading. i thought many might not because of its length. And that fav!! More than thank you.
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Winged Warrior
Date: 9/25/2019 10:48:00 AM
...and a fav too
Date: 9/25/2019 10:10:00 AM
This poem reached me deeply Sunlite. You have shown this so well. Excellent :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:00:00 AM
That was so very kind, Heidi. I am so pleased with what you said.
Date: 9/25/2019 8:01:00 AM
Visits with loved ones are awesome and much loved... Your poem is comforting. Many blessings for you
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:02:00 AM
So glad you came by, and I want you to know I am enjoying your poems now, too.
Date: 9/24/2019 1:34:00 PM
- Really a great description of your thoughts, Sunlite ... gives me sad thoughts - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:03:00 AM
Don't want you to be sad, Sunshine! Just a nostalgic gratitude.
Date: 9/23/2019 9:12:00 AM
Not morbid at all. I too enjoy such visits.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:04:00 AM
That was a great comment to someone as unsure as I am.
Date: 9/22/2019 6:44:00 PM
I relate completely to these circumstances. Well-captured, Sunlite. Best wishes, Gershon
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:08:00 AM
I's bittersweet, Gershon. Thanks for reading and may you have peace in whatever circumstances you may find yourself.
Date: 9/22/2019 12:23:00 PM
A sad reality of life..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 9/26/2019 10:09:00 AM
I hope more nostalgic and gratitude than reality. Thanks, Silent One.

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