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your skin, soft as breath, radiating a warmth too soothing to understand- your hands, strong as ore, cascading safety as I often roam the shores of mishap
a fever races, my passion embraces, chills down my spine thanking God you are mine my love, you soar with the divine (so let’s entwine after we dine…)
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you are near when far, no distance can hover- traveling into tender lavender dreams, seeking only your light, fearing not kismet… and loving none other but you
as we twist into a midnight sway, we tarry into the dawn of day- savoring each touch with a kiss, sailing on into love’s sweet abyss
so I lift my kind hands up with a vow of assurance, for without you I’d be locked in such durance- we shall never part by hand nor heart, living each day with pride; each morn a new start, you by my side- holding you, just us… two I NEED YOU LIKE LUNGS NEED AIR and o, that fawn skin so fair- for our love shall never depart, and yellow has turned blue- your silhouette, like art; hit by cupid’s dart one soul to share, stroke my hair- needing you, just us... two
as each day passes I love you more than the last- utterly adored
gratitude forever with true ease feeling Autumn’s breeze, loving into morn, tonight we're alone; you adorn me, freed me from weeping willow trees; choosing the life we live as genuine lovers... longing, aching with a deep yearn to give, and never running nor blind to a sacred decree; it's just you and me * Forms used in order: 1.) Verse 2.) Couplet 3.) Rhyme 4.) Senryu 5.) Shape Date Written: September 4, 2019 NA: Write the Poem You Have Always Wanted to Write Poetry Contest For the contest: N-A rerun 3 Poetry Contest John Hamilton

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Date: 9/28/2019 12:56:00 PM
Very cool, congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:42:00 PM
A stunner Luloo! I am so happy to see this a top winner! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 9:16:00 PM
Luloo, your poem is stunning in its sensual and tender expression of passionate love accentuated by your lovely heart in a grand finale. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, lovely lady.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:39:00 PM
Amazing. The poem and your love! Lonna
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:46:00 PM
thank you lovely Lonna :)-luloo
Date: 9/26/2019 7:25:00 PM
Ditto to Sandra's comment, hard to believe this got an N/A, congrats on a great stand alone second place!
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:46:00 PM
thank you, I am honored you enjoyed this. I had so much fun writing it. Be blessed dear John :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2019 10:02:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning poetry, love the heart at the end, but this whole poem is just an amazing write my friend, i am in awe....a winning piece contest or not! Excellent write, just wow....:) hugs
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:06:00 AM
you are the sweetest, really. Thank you so much, it wasn't easy let me tell ya. Took almost 2 hours to write. But I loved every second! thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2019 8:00:00 AM
Oh my, Lulu, this is divine! Best for a win!
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/4/2019 8:04:00 AM
thank you very much dear Jeanne! :)-luloo
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Lu Loo
Date: 9/4/2019 8:04:00 AM
thank you very much dear Jeanne! :)-luloo