Just Us Two

your skin, soft as breath, radiating a warmth too soothing to understand- your hands, strong as ore, cascading safety as I often roam the shores of mishap
a fever races, my passion embraces, chills down my spine thanking God you are mine my love, you soar with the divine (so let’s entwine after we dine…)
and
you are near when far, no distance can hover- traveling into tender lavender dreams, seeking only your light, fearing not kismet… and loving none other but you
as we twist into a midnight sway, we tarry into the dawn of day- savoring each touch with a kiss, sailing on into love’s sweet abyss
so I lift my kind hands up with a vow of assurance, for without you I’d be locked in such durance- we shall never part by hand nor heart, living each day with pride; each morn a new start, you by my side- holding you, just us… two I NEED YOU LIKE LUNGS NEED AIR and o, that fawn skin so fair- for our love shall never depart, and yellow has turned blue- your silhouette, like art; hit by cupid’s dart one soul to share, stroke my hair- needing you, just us... two
as each day passes I love you more than the last- utterly adored
gratitude forever with true ease feeling Autumn’s breeze, loving into morn, tonight we're alone; you adorn me, freed me from weeping willow trees; choosing the life we live as genuine lovers... longing, aching with a deep yearn to give, and never running nor blind to a sacred decree; it's just you and me * Forms used in order: 1.) Verse 2.) Couplet 3.) Rhyme 4.) Senryu 5.) Shape Date Written: September 4, 2019 NA: Write the Poem You Have Always Wanted to Write Poetry Contest For the contest: N-A rerun 3 Poetry Contest John Hamilton
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Date: 9/28/2019 12:56:00 PM
Very cool, congrats on your top placement.
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Date: 9/27/2019 10:42:00 PM
A stunner Luloo! I am so happy to see this a top winner! Congratulations! xxoo
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Date: 9/27/2019 9:16:00 PM
Luloo, your poem is stunning in its sensual and tender expression of passionate love accentuated by your lovely heart in a grand finale. Congratulations on your wonderful win. Warmest wishes always, lovely lady.. ~Susan
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Date: 9/27/2019 12:39:00 PM
Amazing. The poem and your love! Lonna
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:46:00 PM
thank you lovely Lonna :)-luloo
Date: 9/26/2019 7:25:00 PM
Ditto to Sandra's comment, hard to believe this got an N/A, congrats on a great stand alone second place!
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Date: 9/27/2019 1:46:00 PM
thank you, I am honored you enjoyed this. I had so much fun writing it. Be blessed dear John :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2019 10:02:00 AM
This is absolutely stunning poetry, love the heart at the end, but this whole poem is just an amazing write my friend, i am in awe....a winning piece contest or not! Excellent write, just wow....:) hugs
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Date: 9/5/2019 7:06:00 AM
you are the sweetest, really. Thank you so much, it wasn't easy let me tell ya. Took almost 2 hours to write. But I loved every second! thank you sweet Sandra :)-luloo
Date: 9/4/2019 8:00:00 AM
Oh my, Lulu, this is divine! Best for a win!
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:04:00 AM
thank you very much dear Jeanne! :)-luloo
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Date: 9/4/2019 8:04:00 AM
thank you very much dear Jeanne! :)-luloo
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