Just Two More Beers

My boyfriend Barney said, "Just two more beers
Then I promise that we'll be out of here."
   But when 'Barn' began to weave
   And as he started to heave
I reminded him, "You promised, my dear."
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Anderson Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 10:11 AM
Oh my, haha. Poor guy! Love Limericks.
Wolf Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 2:40 PM
"Promises, promises," eh? :) gw
Dietrich Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:08 PM
Ha! Keep 'em coming, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:47 PM
I guess you want the beers to keep coming, right?! lol.... Actually, you emboldened me to write another limerick to start the presses rolling today. It's about two dinosaurs, 'Morris and Doris,' and I actually chuckled myself at it... Thanks, Andrea.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 12:39 PM
Hello Gershon Wolf, a promise is a promise to keep. Enjoy your day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 6:11 AM
Hello Gershon Wolf, yes i guess so. Enjoy your day my friend.
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:46 PM
That's right. Gotta keep those promises! Thanks, Darlene.
Sands Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 5:15 AM
LoL Thanks for the laugh Gershon :) Good one!
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:45 PM
Thanks for letting me know that this one gave you a laugh, Heidi. Tuesday Cheer, Gershon
Mcintosh Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 4:44 AM
Cute limerick, dear friend. Bless you, Gina
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Thank you so much, Gina. Happy Tuesday! Blessings, Gershon
Cunningham Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 12:22 AM
Haha, someone's in the doghouse. Nice one Gershon. Tom
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Arf, arf. Thanks, Tom. :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
October 5, 2020 at 8:07 PM
You did not have a choice! Nice rhyming.
Wolf Avatar
October 6, 2020 at 2:40 PM
Promises, promises, as they say! :) gw
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