Just Three Words For Heaven

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Joyous, scribing ballad Underneath the moon Starlight sprinkled lyric Twilight's cosmic rune Tending hearts romantic Heaven's swirling shoals Roiling objects skyward Expanse, alighting souls Each abiding wonder ... Wrought amidst reprise Omnipotent as thunder Requited love's demise Dazzling godlike plunder Supernal yawning skies. ~ 1st Place ~ in the "A Three Word Poem" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor.

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Line Gauthier

Date: 2/25/2019 3:29:00 PM

Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.

John Hamilton

Date: 2/25/2019 11:30:00 AM

Amazing as always Greg!

Jack Webster

Date: 2/25/2019 8:24:00 AM

Congrats, Gregory

P.S. Awtry

Date: 2/25/2019 5:18:00 AM

BRAVO!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/25/2019 2:12:00 AM

- Congratulations on your winning proposal, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/25/2019 3:52:00 AM

Many kind thanks to you, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3

Gershon Wolf

Date: 2/24/2019 8:01:00 PM

If this is what you mean by 'muse-less,' I stand open-mouth and amused, of course, as these 'three words' are so tightly and lovingly wrought. Blessings and Joy, Gershon

Gershon Wolf
Date: 2/25/2019 7:21:00 PM

Many congrats on your win, my friend! Best wishes, gw

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 2/25/2019 3:52:00 AM

Ah, you are always too kind, my friend, and I am always so thankful that you ARE! Blessings and thanks, Brother! :-)