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Just Three Words For Heaven

Joyous, scribing ballad
Underneath the moon
Starlight sprinkled lyric
Twilight's cosmic rune

Tending hearts romantic
Heaven's swirling shoals
Roiling objects skyward
Expanse, alighting souls
Each abiding wonder ...

Wrought amidst reprise
Omnipotent as thunder
Requited love's demise
Dazzling godlike plunder
Supernal yawning skies.




~ 1st Place ~  in the "A Three Word Poem" Poetry Contest, Bobby May, Judge & Sponsor.
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Gauthier Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:29 PM
Lovely, Gregory. Congrats on your top win.
Hamilton Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 11:30 AM
Amazing as always Greg!
Webster Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 8:24 AM
Congrats, Gregory
Awtry Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 5:18 AM
BRAVO!
Andresen Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 2:12 AM
- Congratulations on your winning proposal, Gregory :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Barden Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:52 AM
Many kind thanks to you, Anne-Lise - I'm pleased you liked it! :-) <3
Wolf Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 8:01 PM
If this is what you mean by 'muse-less,' I stand open-mouth and amused, of course, as these 'three words' are so tightly and lovingly wrought. Blessings and Joy, Gershon
Wolf Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 7:21 PM
Many congrats on your win, my friend! Best wishes, gw
Barden Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:52 AM
Ah, you are always too kind, my friend, and I am always so thankful that you ARE! Blessings and thanks, Brother! :-)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 7:29 PM
Congratulations on your top win my friend! xomo <3
Barden Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:51 AM
Thanks so much, Maureen! :-)
Roper Avatar
February 24, 2019 at 6:31 PM
Greg, congratulations on your win.
Barden Avatar
February 25, 2019 at 3:51 AM
Thank you very much, Eve! :-) <3
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