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Just Think

You say I haven't seen, God doesn't exist In trying to prove you are right, you persist Attached to transient objects in your surrounds Are your actions intellectually sound? 05.08.2021 Syllables count 11 each line checked at PS syllables counter L MILTON HANKINS YOUR BEST QUATRAIN NA BS1

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 8/8/2021 10:30:00 AM

So beautiful question at the end. Congratulations on your win. How are you?

Rama Balasubramanian
Date: 8/8/2021 10:53:00 AM

I am fine. How about you?

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/7/2021 11:30:00 AM

This is a philosophically sound question.

Alexis Y.

Date: 8/5/2021 1:49:00 PM

Wow! Rama, Your question is profound and thought-provoking. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/5/2021 12:23:00 PM

The question of the ages Rama. Well done in its wisdom! Best wishes for the contest.

Sotto Poet

Date: 8/5/2021 11:38:00 AM

Your question is pertinent, "Are your actions intellectually sound?" for those who deny God's existence. I enjoyed reading your poem, Rama. Good luck with the contest.