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Just the Two of Us

Just the two of us in this euphoric air Except for the moon deep in the water Shifting demurely to be on my side Rising up resolutely to hold my hand. You hold me closer, your hand in mine Reaching for a kiss to claim your prize Taking me to summit of eternal love Residing in paradise since birth of time. There is no care for we sail together As skies rejoice with cosmic overtones While gentle winds blow heavenly kiss Urging milky-way to be part of our bliss. A celebration grips the banks of ocean Bouncing water-tunes of lifted emotions As ocean commands the tides of passion To deliver us gently to our destination. A lone flower blooms in your garden As nocturnal moth senses fiery encounter When nectar exhales its scented whiffs Signaling readiness of ardent cherish. February 8, 2018 HM: Brian's Choice F Contest

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Date: 12/31/2018 12:44:00 PM
Hi Vijay, another golden write from a poet of such high stature, as you are. Such beautiful visions your words do create. You write romance so well my friend. Another write to touch the heart. Have a very Happy New Year Vijay. Your friend always....Mike.
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Date: 3/25/2018 6:09:00 PM
Your imagination is visually seen in descriptive word choices. That's what real poet can do...and you do so well.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 12/13/2018 7:49:00 AM
Thank you Barbara..appreciate your kind feedback.
Date: 2/10/2018 2:05:00 AM
Great images.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/10/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Kai.
Date: 2/9/2018 9:45:00 PM
So beautiful and descriptive, Vijay! Janice
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Date: 2/10/2018 7:02:00 AM
Thank you Janice.
Date: 2/9/2018 8:03:00 PM
Vijay, your beautifully romantic poem is full of luscious imagery of love especially your last stanza. Just lovely!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/10/2018 7:02:00 AM
Happy to read your comments--many thanks Susan.
Date: 2/9/2018 6:36:00 PM
You are a true romantic Vijay! You write with the beauty from your heart.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/10/2018 7:01:00 AM
Many thanks James..enjoyed reading your comments.
Date: 2/9/2018 12:56:00 PM
you make me swoon with this charming write, vijay... beautiful!..huggs
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 3:41:00 PM
A pleasure to read your comments..many thanks, nette.
Date: 2/9/2018 11:45:00 AM
So lovely and romantic, Vijay! Your words create a beautiful world, enjoyed. :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 3:40:00 PM
Thank you Laura--appreciate your kind words.
Date: 2/9/2018 10:08:00 AM
So romantic, Vijay, I like the imagery for your surroundings .. Hugs Eve
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 10:48:00 AM
Thank you Eve.
Date: 2/9/2018 7:16:00 AM
Wonderful imagery ... Nicely flowing free verse ... A joy to read ...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thank you Probir.
Date: 2/9/2018 7:13:00 AM
A romantic poem that uplifts the heart onto the realm of bliss dear friend, Vijay!
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 10:46:00 AM
Thank you my friend, Demetrios.
Date: 2/8/2018 9:02:00 PM
Wow... This is so beautiful... lovely write...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:10:00 AM
Thank you Supraja.
Date: 2/8/2018 7:29:00 PM
A lovely, romantic write Vijay :) ~Judy
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Judy.
Date: 2/8/2018 5:11:00 PM
This is very beautiful like a serenade.
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:09:00 AM
Thank you Kelli..appreciate your visit and comments.
Date: 2/8/2018 3:58:00 PM
i love the flow of this relaxing poem Vijay, great writing :)
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Lewis.
Date: 2/8/2018 2:52:00 PM
Wow...Imagery all over...Lovely poem of love...All the best Vijay
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Arturo.
Date: 2/8/2018 2:23:00 PM
There is a song called just the two of us, however that is going off on a tanger.. Love that last stanza... this is very romantic Vijay...
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Vijay Pandit
Date: 2/9/2018 7:08:00 AM
Thank you Silent One.

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