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Just the Right Place

Today the sky is full to bursting, the air a cloak ne’er night. The lawns so plump with chlorophyll the world’s full of life. A lassitude fills harried hearts they slow their frantic pace. The day is wide with wonder and all are in their place.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 9/23/2009 9:24:00 AM
Now this is sweet and serene. Have a great say. Vince
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Date: 8/9/2009 10:47:00 PM
great poetry! thankz for the message and best to you.....
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Date: 8/6/2009 4:11:00 PM
Really nice composition, Deborah, carry on with your good writing. Cheers Gert
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Date: 8/4/2009 5:53:00 AM
The day is wide with wonder...Indeed...Thanks for your comment yeah it's not really a muzzle... more like a loud horn ;) lol .....Kris
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Date: 7/30/2009 5:56:00 AM
What a wonderful place to be. Awesome writing Deborah as usual. Love, Carol
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Date: 7/30/2009 12:38:00 AM
Nice poetry Debbie.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments.
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Date: 7/29/2009 5:51:00 PM
Love this Deborah!! Makes me want to take it all in with my camera!! (Must be beautiful around your farmhouse!) More photos sometime?? ~ Carrie
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:48:00 PM
what a nice piece! Love the chlorophyll line. BG
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:17:00 PM
Kool write Deborah>>James
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Date: 7/29/2009 2:03:00 PM
inspirational Deb! words to live by!....jim
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:43:00 PM
Nice writing. Sara
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Date: 7/29/2009 1:30:00 PM
usually you miss the best places that are in front of you, good write!
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