Debbie Guzzi Poet Carpe Diem

Just the Right Place

Today the sky is full to bursting,
the air a cloak ne’er night.
The lawns so plump with chlorophyll
the world’s full of life.

A lassitude fills harried hearts
they slow their frantic pace.
The day is wide with wonder
and all are in their place.

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Vince Suzadail Jr. September 23, 2009 at 9:24 AM Now this is sweet and serene. Have a great say. Vince

Michelle Norvell August 9, 2009 at 10:47 PM great poetry! thankz for the message and best to you.....

Gert W. Knop August 6, 2009 at 4:11 PM Really nice composition, Deborah, carry on with your good writing. Cheers Gert

Kristopher S. Kern August 4, 2009 at 5:53 AM The day is wide with wonder...Indeed...Thanks for your comment yeah it's not really a muzzle... more like a loud horn ;) lol .....Kris

Carol Sunshine Brown July 30, 2009 at 5:56 AM What a wonderful place to be. Awesome writing Deborah as usual. Love, Carol

Brian Strand July 30, 2009 at 12:38 AM Nice poetry Debbie.Rgds Brian and thanks for your welcome comments.

Carrie Richards July 29, 2009 at 5:51 PM Love this Deborah!! Makes me want to take it all in with my camera!! (Must be beautiful around your farmhouse!) More photos sometime?? ~ Carrie

Barbara Gorelick July 29, 2009 at 2:48 PM what a nice piece! Love the chlorophyll line. BG

James Fraser July 29, 2009 at 2:17 PM Kool write Deborah>>James

James Marshall Goff July 29, 2009 at 2:03 PM inspirational Deb! words to live by!....jim

Sara Kendrick July 29, 2009 at 1:43 PM Nice writing. Sara

Jessica Arteaga July 29, 2009 at 1:30 PM usually you miss the best places that are in front of you, good write!