Just Ten Words

Diamond gems 
A girl’s best friend
True love never ends


Jan Allison
8th April 2014

Written for ‘Just Ten Words’ contest sponsored by Nette Onclaud
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Shiells Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:26 AM
Hi Jan, This is perfect!! All ten-) Love your writes my friend. Big congrats... Peace, Deborah
Allison Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 10:28 AM
Thanks Deborah I loved the challenge of writing this - short but sweet poem. Hugs Jan x
Callus Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 5:32 PM
Came back to your 'stone' poem; this too is a good one :) gl // paul
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April 10, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Thanks Paul Sorry you were too late to enter - will be tough one to call see some fabulous writes Jan x
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April 10, 2014 at 8:32 AM
This is sweet, I hope you have found your true love. It is far more valuable and unique than any diamond.
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 8:44 AM
oh i found him 25 yrs ago Richard!
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April 10, 2014 at 12:45 AM
Very nice... Verlena
Allison Avatar
April 10, 2014 at 12:46 AM
Thanks for dropping by - so kind of you to comment on my works. Hugs Jan xxx
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April 9, 2014 at 7:38 PM
Jan, this is so sweet and lovely. Hugs
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April 10, 2014 at 12:10 AM
Thanks for the lovely comment Cecilia. Hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Good luck in Nette's contest my dear sister! Loving hugs, your bro Jack XOXOX
Allison Avatar
April 9, 2014 at 5:02 PM
Thanks Jack. Bigggg Huggs Jan xxxxx
Smith Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:39 PM
This is wonderful Jan....hugs Tim
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April 8, 2014 at 5:43 PM
Oh thanks for the lovely comment Tim. Lovely contest to enter - think all the entries will be in by today! Hugs as ever Jan xxx
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April 8, 2014 at 4:58 PM
Reads like a winner..Way to go for the contest..Thanks for the visit to my page..Yes, those birds can fluff up those feathers to look two or three times their size..Good insulation on a bad day..Sara
Allison Avatar
April 8, 2014 at 5:03 PM
Aww thanks Sara for such a lovely comment - I can but try :-) Hugs Jan x
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