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Some semblance of a garden dance prettiest flowers all mid-bloom forever fragrant invulnerably held tight silhouettes entwined on an anxious night Little lifts of spirits once tough freeing melodies craving escape emerging endlessly in needed trust eyeing life's angels amongst stardust Fingertips off slowly painfully slipping in wrinkled times of destiny encumbered splitting me in two the moon capturing her final view Mercy floats off on gilded wings where final pleas and begs fell mute peering out the gate promise to wait held in a fractured heart just stay

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Date: 12/21/2016 1:55:00 PM
So nice , Tim... :) Hugs and Merry Christmas and Happy Holidays
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Date: 12/20/2016 11:26:00 AM
So Romantic..somehow full of longing..Beautiful.
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Date: 12/16/2016 9:57:00 PM
Victor said it very well, you are a born romantic!
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Date: 12/15/2016 3:37:00 PM
WoW! Tim, this is sooo romantic and well written. You picked the perfect song to accompany your poem. They complimented each other very well. Well done. A without a doubt seven:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/15/2016 1:28:00 PM
So lovely and romantic...loved it! Super 7
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Date: 12/15/2016 12:47:00 PM
- The music and your text flow with lovely wishes, Tim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 1:13:00 PM
Thanks A-L...I listened to the song yesterday and it stuck with me.
Date: 12/15/2016 12:45:00 PM
Wow, talk about a heart tug...this poem does just that. Beautifully written Tim.
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Date: 12/15/2016 1:11:00 PM
Thanks Chris for all support.
Date: 12/15/2016 12:17:00 PM
When I'm back home I can listen... Your poem is so full of melancholy, yearning and timelessness. I understand that so well.
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Tim Smith
Date: 12/15/2016 1:10:00 PM
Thank you so much Darren

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