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Just Stating the Obvious Poetry Contest

Every new day, the sun will rise.
As time passes, the moon expands.
Reasons to act without surprise.

Every day, the wind brings new ambition.
The river flows into the shoreline.
Every day holds a new lesson.

Every day, a new baby is born.
After nine months of pregnancy.
God promises and bestows adorned.

Stars will illuminate our nights.
Large ships navigate in deeper water.
Abetted by vast cosmic sights 

Plants will surely grow.
It's an unavoidable indication!
Obvious, as we all know.

Without a problem, there is no solution.
We prefer to go right to specifics.
Valuables are found in the deep section.

Outcomes are entirely arbitrary.
How deeply one will be involved.
Outside the scope of the fantasy.

Forecast what people say, I believe.
Vague terms are complex to discern.
Events were hardly what we perceive.


1st Place Contest Win

Written: April 18, 2021
Just Stating The Obvious Poetry Contest Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brother Jacob
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Merryman Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 3:55 PM
Well done, Lasaad! Congrats on your 1st place win! Blessings, Kim M
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:11 PM
Much thanks Kim, it's actually an incredible delight to see you visiting my page, a debt of gratitude is in order for your warm congrats and my absolute best wishes to you.
Seeker Avatar
May 19, 2021 at 10:34 PM
Deep write, Lassad! Enjoyed every word. Congrats on your win!
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:14 PM
thank you kindly for your pleasant motion, it's such a lot of appreciated, my absolute best respects and warm wishes
Y. Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 1:15 PM
Hi Lasaad, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on a well-deserved win. Have a great day, my friend:-) Alexis
Poet Avatar
May 20, 2021 at 4:15 PM
dearest Alexis, thank you so much again for visiting my page and for the sweet congrats
Roper Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brother Jacob's contest, Lasaad.
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 12:23 PM
Thanks, Eve; your nice comment is so much appreciated.
Edmonds  Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 10:11 AM
Congratulations on your win Lasaad, it’s a wondrous story, each day is a new page filled with glory, obviously… Belle
Poet Avatar
May 18, 2021 at 10:53 AM
Thanks for your nice congrats Belle, and for visiting my page, blessings and a great day
De Beaulieu Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Hello Lasaad Tayeb, A lot to take in with all that was said. Enjoy your evening my friend.
Rone Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 8:40 AM
The second verse sent me off! Magical and genius! Thank you. - Ken
Poet Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:01 AM
Thanks, Ken, I really appreciate your kind words so much; best regards and warm hugs// Lasaad
Daniel Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 1:17 AM
Lovely and full of obvious facts stated poetically, Lasaad, wonderful thoughts:)
Poet Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 9:00 AM
Thanks, Joe, for reading and commenting, and for the kind words, have a great day, best regards
Pettit Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 8:12 PM
Should be a strong contender in the contest. Good luck with it.
Poet Avatar
April 23, 2021 at 8:58 AM
Thanks, Robert, I really appreciate those kind words
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April 19, 2021 at 2:35 PM
A brilliant poem Lasaad, so many truisms in every stanza, outcomes are entirely arbitrary, wow, this goes right down to the quantum level, where particles will only decide what state to take, by being observed, this poem is a stroke of genius, with a mind bending photograph to accompany, A fave from me, cheers David
Poet Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 3:15 PM
You have no idea how happy and thankful I am. Thank you so much for your kind words of encouragement; I am pretty grateful for it. Have a blessed night, and my very best regards to you
Buhagiar Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 10:47 PM
A deep poem. Each stanza has a lesson. We need to heed.
Poet Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:26 AM
Thanks, Victor, your encouraging words are greatly appreciated, dear Friend, have a wonderful day with my best regards, Las
Buehler Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 8:58 PM
Your poem is excellently crafted, with very nice rhyming, Lasaad. Love the picture, too. I can see this poem being a winner. Blessings, Evelyn
Poet Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:24 AM
Thanks for reading and for the kind words Evelyn, that's so nice of you, have a blessed day and warm hugs, Las
Hankins Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:11 PM
Nice job, Lasaad. I'd say this should place high upon the list of winners. Your list is full of excellent phrases.
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:36 PM
Thanks for reading and for your kind words Milton have a wonderful evening, with my best regards
Y. Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 5:59 PM
Hi Lasaad, You’ve penned a good entry for the contest theme. Each stanza is a stand alone verse. However, I liked stanza three “Everyday, a baby is born, After nine months of pregnancy, God promises and bestow.”a tad bit more than the others. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day. Soup mail:-) Alexis
Poet Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 7:38 PM
Hi Alexis and thanks for the kind words; I'm glad you like it, have a nice evening, with my best hugs
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