Just Some Notes That Look Like a Poem :)

Everyday, 
I stare into the thin air surrounding me,
watching the world pass me by day by day.
When im too busy gazing at stars,
i fall back to the harsh reality of life.
Walking the earth, hoping to reeach the heavens in the sky
but destined a long eternity damned in hell.
I won't repent my sins fo ri have none,
but nor im a pure enough to catch a glimpse of the gates of heaven.
So as i age i continue to watch the world grow old around me.
making all that counts, last, if i am going down
im going down with memories of me scatterd like ashes
For when you look down on me, remember i will rise up against you.
Smite you with your own methods, leave you lying there dazed in a days work
im on the way to the top, i'l get there with no compromise

When the days get darker the nights become longer
When i start to fall down at the very pause of my breath,
i  heave my self with all my strength, just clinching onto life,
asif it had railings to guide you up the stairs into heavens gardens,
As i look down at the youth of today,
they breath new life, bring new hope.
Into the world of tomorrow, the past has faded.
covered up with lies and decisieve imps.
The devil is at play in our nightmares, 
he lurks in your darkest dream, the weak pray
The strong, crusade, burning a path through satans den

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 8/24/2010 9:33:00 AM
Thanks for the comments, remember once you read, comment on anything and if you can offer advice im happy to listen.
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Date: 8/21/2010 9:19:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your very creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more.. with luv..
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Date: 8/21/2010 6:08:00 PM
Hi Aiden! I just read your write, enjoyed. A lovely way to end my day, have a blessed Saturday *LUV ~S.K.A.T.
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