Just Ranting

Not all addictions are negative.
For instance, I am very fond
of breathing.  A cool sip of water
on a bake-day break.  Walking tandem
in the moonlight.  Romance and poetry
seeming as important to my health as good
blood flow and a rich bowel movement -- 
somehow all looped in a complex
biology.   

What I feel in my mind as important
as my other senses.  What is taken 
from the outside, categorized and
stored internally.  I have many shelves
for keepers, interactive and those in 
saving repose. The mind, a chemical, 
electrical alchemy of sorts.  Transforming
perceptions into ruling currents
that ebb and flow as do the earth’s
seas.  I guess, gravity reaches deep,
to my way of thinking lays down and lifts, 
enlarging science.  I see a Creator, behold a loving 
heart dissolving that apple-distance between
a mythical garden and my living room.  The
ancients called them gods, we scoff while defending
our guardian angels.  Reality is also thought I think; 
more than the process somehow our views a dimension
alive.  In my later years becoming more aware and fondest 
of an interloping, spiritual Sixth Sense.  An imagined helium soul. 
Is death a burst of bubble, or soaring release? One’s life a nibble, or
all of the feast.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 2:11 AM
- Joe, this was thoughtful and interesting - Romance and poetry seeming as important to my health as good blood flow and a rich bowel movement ... smiling :) - hugs
DiMino Avatar
September 14, 2026 at 3:50 AM
Hi Anne; thank you for wading through this short volume. Have a wonderful creative week. Blessings my friend!
Wolf Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 7:45 PM
My comment about rants like this: You can; I can't. ~ S & S (Short & Sweet)
DiMino Avatar
September 13, 2026 at 8:45 PM
Thank you, Geshon; this write was getting lonely without a comment. Yeh, a bit long, but it was cathartic.
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