Just One Touch

Just one touch
unknowingly - 
the imprints of silent love -
the fragrance of fingers-
myriads of self kisses
on the same spot
in secrecy
of the bedroom later.
As a pebble dropped in a rill,
a thousand romantic ripples....

(Published in 'Romantic Morsels' anthology by Zimbell House Publishing, LLC, USA)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Nance Avatar
September 3, 2014 at 6:56 AM
This is great! Well done on your love poem, you captured the intimacy of love perfectly, and them last lines, wow! Grats on your win!
Guzzi Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:27 PM
Very nice Fab, the last 2 lines are special! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Devnath  Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 3:38 PM
Congrats on your superb win, my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
A. Sharma Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 7:37 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write!
Mehta Avatar
August 30, 2014 at 1:29 AM
Congrats on a top placed win, Fabiyas
Smith Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 8:50 PM
love the kisses,....congrats
Meier-Hans Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:46 PM
Congratulations on your win.
Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 7:43 PM
I'm with Carrie. those last two lines are splendid!! congrats for your fine win.
Richards Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:38 AM
I love the last two lines........uniquely your own !! Well done !!
A   Avatar
August 29, 2014 at 11:22 AM
Hi Fab, I love the touch, and ending ripples. Congratulations, on your awesome win. A wonderful and sweet poem, True Love, it is!!! Thank you for supporting my contest. Enjoy my blog "I'm Standing Behind You" if you like or have the time. Enjoy the coming week. LOVE LINDA
A   Avatar
October 20, 2013 at 12:35 AM
FAB... CONGRATULATIONS:) on having your poem featured on the soups HOME PAGE. Goodnight poet friend <3 =LINDA
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 8, 2011 at 4:24 AM
Congratulations on your win x
Johnson Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 9:07 PM
Very romantic. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 5:34 PM
Very descriptive, Fabiyas. a Big congratulations on your win.
Merryman Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:41 PM
A very romantic write. Congrats on your win! Thank you for your nice comments on my poem "Baking Cookies". I appreciate your taking the time to read and comment on my poems. Kim
Quigley Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 2:28 PM
Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. Enjoyed
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:50 PM
Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Beautiful" contest Fab. Love, Carol
Williams Avatar
December 7, 2011 at 12:29 PM
FABIYAS, congrats on your win very romantic..David
Poet Avatar
November 10, 2011 at 6:35 AM
An amazing write from you Fabiyas.Congrats on your win.
Sweetheart Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 4:29 PM
Congrats Fabiyas on a fantastic first place win my friend.. wonderfull...
Johnson Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 7:27 AM
Extremely provocative phrases. Congratulations on your win. Love, Joyce
Brown Avatar
November 9, 2011 at 5:53 AM
Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Whatever"contest Fabiyas. Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 16, 2011 at 8:15 AM
Congratulations, Fabiyas, sounds steamy!
Mehta Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 3:46 PM
My congratulations on this win in the contest of Carol, Fabiyas
Sweetheart Avatar
July 15, 2011 at 2:05 PM
Congrats FABIYAS on your terrific third place win in first date contest my friend with this awesome write ..luv..
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