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Just One Slip

Hammering away happily whistling,to himself blithely his hammer slipped his nail blackened the expletives came quickly ty Rick for the last line

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Date: 2/4/2014 3:27:00 PM
great ending for this fun limerick!!
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Shadow Hamilton
Date: 2/4/2014 3:33:00 PM
thats Rick's contribution its a pearl ty hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 6:50:00 PM
Shadow great limerick, I had to laugh because Peter had done exactly that and he has a black finger nail,
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:59:00 AM
ouch poor Peter so nice to have you both back Vera I have missed you both. It is always funny when it is not you lol hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 12:44:00 PM
I feel his pain,what a pity! Nice one Shadow. Kayod5.
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Date: 2/4/2014 2:57:00 AM
I think most of us do lol ty Kayod5 hugs
Date: 2/3/2014 1:02:00 AM
Ha ha, this is a funny one Shadow! I really enjoyed reading this masterful poem this evening! What an outstanding piece, Great Work!!
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Date: 2/3/2014 7:14:00 AM
lol it is always funny as long as it is not your thumb Russell ouch. ty so much Shadow x smile hug

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