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Just One of Them Sleepless Night

Somehow you found yourself wide awake Not lonely but unsure of what to do Your other half is sound asleep and dreaming away You yourself is far from sleepy Your body is too energize from all the caffeines You’re far from famish Exercising isn’t your thing Facebook became boring Sudoku got tiresome Nothing is good on TV but obnoxious fake news Read all your books Did all you house chores Completed your last puzzle Spent hours on poetry soup And now... you’re laying on the recliner chair rocking away and staring up at the ceiling Staring but unvisualized Yes your mind is jam packed with thoughts But what are they Your legs are restless Wiggling them toes Pulling on your hair Then switching to bite your nails Seriously ~ gross Sighing Looking at the clock It’s well after midnight Oh yeah your mind blink and say oh time to sleep Your eyes shut your mind down to NOT yet and blinking madly Your mind sped off in black and white And you continue to rock yourself on the recliner And so the night goes on Wiggling them toes Pulling on the hair Staring up away Unnoticed of the approaching dawn Somehow you managed to remember to turn the lights off And everything went blank ————— Goodnight my soupers

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Date: 2/11/2021 7:11:00 AM
As I am still in middle school, I shouldn't be able to relate to this, but trust me, I understand! Great poem!!! Wishing you a peaceful night, Bridget
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Date: 1/20/2021 10:38:00 AM
Sometime Akkina 7 day's a week If you care not only for yourself but take on board the woes of other's
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Date: 1/13/2021 5:47:00 PM
I am looking around my house now for the hidden cameras; I know you were here.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/13/2021 8:55:00 PM
OMG, I’m dying... LOL!
Date: 1/11/2021 7:00:00 AM
Ah You describe it perfectly. It's no fun. so right can't sleep all night then when you have to wake up. you fall asleep. well done. Pete.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/11/2021 9:28:00 PM
Yep, and a miserable day at work...Lol
Date: 1/10/2021 9:05:00 PM
Very nice Akkina. This poem resonates with me. This happens frequently on insomniacs like me. Belated New Year wishes...
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/11/2021 9:27:00 PM
Thank you so much JCB
Date: 1/10/2021 4:36:00 AM
Yes! Like Harry and you...I have been there. You have captured that feeling so well in this poem, dear Akkina. ~ Elaine
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/10/2021 5:38:00 PM
Awe, thank you so much :)
Date: 1/4/2021 9:10:00 PM
Been there and done all of that, Akkina, but you in this poem truly bring it to the fore with exceptional poerty..All the best for the New Year..Harry
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/5/2021 6:08:00 PM
Yeah, it's crazy how our mind is very stubborn at times...LOL! Anyhow, thank you so mcu for this lovely visit :)
Date: 1/4/2021 9:47:00 AM
Well conceived and excellently written dearest, Akkina! Happy New Year!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 1/5/2021 6:05:00 PM
Thank you so much my friend
Date: 1/4/2021 6:43:00 AM
You captured this well. My sweetie is similarly afflicted.
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Date: 1/3/2021 10:48:00 PM
Kina, came here to wish you and yours a very Happy New Year!... also hoping to read many NEW creations from your wonderful pen. Take care dear friend. Hugs ~ Ani
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Date: 1/3/2021 6:01:00 AM
There are a lot of us who can identify here. We feel your pain. God Bless, JB
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Date: 1/1/2021 7:23:00 AM
It seems I'm not the only poet who has sleepless nights. I could relate to all the "activities" that kept you awake, Akkina. I've found meditation and self-hypnosis can promote sleep most of the time. Enjoyed your poem! (There is a stream of consciousness contest this should do well in.) Best wishes for the new year, Carolyn
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Date: 12/27/2020 1:19:00 PM
I can understand how this can be Akkina. You have written about it so clearly. I hope that you will get some peaceful rest soon. Take care! :)
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Date: 12/26/2020 2:02:00 AM
Dear Akkina, I hope you won't get many of these sleepless nights which you expressed so vividly! The solution would have been to go in the kitchen and start on next day's cooking:) The worst part is when you finally fall into a lovely deep sleep only to get woken up cos you're running late...ugh :( By the way, I like the new avatar:) Regards // paul
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/26/2020 7:41:00 AM
Thank you, Paul. Wishing you a great weekend :)
Date: 12/24/2020 6:39:00 PM
I hate those kinds of nights. You described it so well. THANK you for saying "fake news" indeed, fake news is the cause of what is hurting the nation now the most. When will it all go away?
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/25/2020 11:55:00 AM
Thank you, Drea, and Merry Christmas to you and yours
Date: 12/22/2020 7:49:00 PM
Time seems to drag on nights when you can't sleep. I enjoyed your wonderful poem very much. :=)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/23/2020 6:06:00 PM
Thank you so much, Evelyn :)
Date: 12/21/2020 6:32:00 AM
LOL...Love this, Akkina. Spent many nights wiggling my toes. Merry Christmas to you and yours...Sending love.. Charlie
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/21/2020 3:31:00 PM
LOL... thanks Charlie, and Merry Christmas to you too.
Date: 12/20/2020 10:32:00 AM
haha. Love this.We have all had these nights, and you describe them perfectly .The last line says it all. when we need to get up. we sleep. well done. enjoyed it. Hope you get some sleep. LOL.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/20/2020 2:25:00 PM
Thank you my friend :)
Date: 12/17/2020 8:31:00 PM
Oh my !! Seems we all have experienced these moments at some point. Can't sleep, can't think- can't stop moving. The night holds us captive. Eyes wide open. Yes, it is "Just one of them sleepless nights" Indeed. You have created a Masterpiece, as the night folds around you. :) Brandy
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/18/2020 1:56:00 PM
Awe, my beautiful friend, thank you so very much :)
Date: 12/15/2020 8:00:00 PM
Oh, my dear awesome poetess friend, I feel your "sleepless" pain.. I hate it when this happens and you've captured the restless, churning, tossing and turning angst so eloquently. Expressive and impressive! I hope you catch up on your sweet dreams soon, my beautiful sizzle sister. Warmest wishes, love and hugs.. ~Susan
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2020 6:17:00 AM
Oh my beautiful friend, how you always bring smile upon my face, and I truly truly appreciate you. Thank you so much... xoxo
Date: 12/15/2020 5:13:00 PM
lol, I have had a few of those nights too, I sympathize with you Akkina, try breathing meditation, it seems to work for me, thank you for sharing your poem today, be blessed.
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2020 6:14:00 AM
I’ve yet to try meditation but I will keep it in mine. Thank you so much, Rose, and god bless :)
Date: 12/15/2020 4:57:00 PM
Lingering and long name lot of words to digest he's probably sure to name this Jewel this verse you should have called "Restless" A FAV for me write on- Write on James
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2020 6:12:00 AM
Thank you so much my friend :)
Date: 12/15/2020 4:28:00 PM
I can definitely relate to this, Akkina. Great poem :)
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/17/2020 6:12:00 AM
Yeah, I don’t know what is it that we get so restless sometimes. Lol!
Date: 12/15/2020 8:58:00 AM
I swam down this 'stream of consciousness', and felt the same happen in me!! An excellent write, indeed, Akkina!!
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/15/2020 3:16:00 PM
Awe, thank you so much, Newton :)
Date: 12/15/2020 7:51:00 AM
Sleepless nights nudge the muse, Very nicely penned Akkina..
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Akkina Downing
Date: 12/15/2020 3:15:00 PM
Thank you so much, Joseph :)
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