Just One Night...

We were seized by desire,
On one hot and steamy night;
Burning up with the fire,
That our passion did ignite;

It left us wanting more,
As we strode into the lake;
Our bodies we then did explore,
Rolling with the wake;

Our bodies moved in sync,
On that steamy night in June;
Bringing us up to the brink,
Our only witness, the moon;

That sad night marked the end of,
Our once Steamy Summer Love;


~For A Rambling Poet's Contest~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Brown Avatar
July 19, 2010 at 7:26 AM
Congratulations Tirzah on your well deserved win in A Rambling Poet's contest "Steamy Summer Love". Love, Carol
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 7:55 PM
Congratulations, I enjoyed reading this one again, Tirzah. Luv, Andrea
Haick Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 11:54 AM
Warm congratulations on this hot write, Tirzah! Goes to my favs. Love, Audrey
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2010 at 8:51 AM
Congrats Tirzah on your winning poem in the ladies part of Steamy Summer Love.. with this beautiful and exquisite write my friend.. enjoy with luv..
K. Avatar
July 15, 2010 at 2:40 PM
ooh wee ooh wee-- this sure is steamy, Tirzah! And you made writing it look easy! Wish you the best in the contest :) & thanks so much for my placement in your contest ^_^ -- nikko :)
Gelb Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 6:42 PM
Good.
Sweetheart Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 8:58 AM
WoW Tirzah this is dynamic.. good luck in the contest.. great Sonnet and inspiring to read such romantic stories develop into true love.. enjoyed my friend.. with luv....
Dietrich Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 7:38 PM
well, gosh, gone just like that? Too much too soon is what I think. Nice steamy writing, dear Tirzah! Luv, Andrea
Mehta Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 7:18 PM
Very wonderful sonnet. Good luck in the contest
Roberts Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 6:21 PM
hot one, good job, good luck in the contest
Miller Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 6:12 PM
I like this one by you. Thanks for sharing your art.
Culverhouse Avatar
July 12, 2010 at 6:09 PM
steamy write, enjoyed
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