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Just One More Day

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James Peranteau

Date: 5/13/2020 9:35:00 AM

i showed up....*.vinks, james

Robert Pettit

Date: 6/4/2017 9:28:00 PM

I had to come and look at some of your work after your pretty name made me curious. This is a nice submission. I hope to see more of it soon.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/5/2016 4:38:00 PM

Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. Always with LUV -- LINDA

Julie Clark

Date: 1/30/2016 7:19:00 AM

oh my goodness so touching my son who is just 20 has been touched deeply with suicide many of his songs were written based on the feelings he experienced very good poem glad it has a happy ending

Chris Boskovski

Date: 12/23/2015 12:37:00 PM

A beautiful and powerful write! I really very much enjoyed it! :)

Skat A

Date: 12/16/2015 12:36:00 AM

MOCKINGBIRD, congrats on your fine win. SKAT

Eve Roper

Date: 12/14/2015 7:59:00 AM

Congratulations on your win.

Constance La France

Date: 12/14/2015 12:15:00 AM

Mockingbird, congratulations on your wonderful win ~

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/13/2015 7:33:00 PM

This was an interesting one to read and makes me wonder about this person. Congrats for your win.

Mockingbird Stevenson
Date: 12/13/2015 7:48:00 PM

Thankyou! This poem was based on a friends mixed emotions after she lost her partner to depression. She spoke of how she wished she could see him again. And how angry she was that he left with so many things unsaid. And how despite her anger she still missed and truly loved him. Btw, I love reading your work. You write so beautifully.