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Just One Look

just one look is all it takes blue sky eyes into green the color of the sea I feel the spark--the intensity the fresh breath of love breathing life into me there is nothing more I could want nothing more I could ever need goosebumps form without a chill a touch brings heat from deep within I feel the spark--the intensity the fresh breath of love breathing life into me there is nothing more I could want nothing more I could ever need through a door left slightly ajar bolted from the inside once you enter I feel the spark--the intensity the fresh breath of love breathing life into me there is nothing more I could want nothing more I could ever need

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Date: 11/1/2010 12:05:00 PM
It was such a pleasure to read your excellent writing today J B. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/31/2010 7:25:00 PM
great thoughts.... love hits you like that, we are looking at Mr. Muscle and scrawny just steals your heart before muscle man knew what was what. LOL
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