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Just One Bite

just one bite of you like a fine fruit that fills my mouth with sensation tease my taste buds sugary juice of love you are my passion my greatest pleasure you are the candy that melts in my mouth not in my hands like a strawberry dipped in milk chocolate a combination of flavors that sears my lips a tantalizing treat come be my fruit of passion my candy that pleases these flames aching for just one bite of you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/30/2010 5:37:00 AM
Holding your theme through several changing, but related metaphors is the gem here. Good write.
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Date: 5/6/2010 3:24:00 AM
good morning, what a tasty read, love it,..p.d.
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Date: 4/30/2010 7:55:00 AM
Got me hungry! Very nice, Travis!
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Date: 4/29/2010 6:47:00 PM
claps...oh wait you can't see that can you? great poem. i felt like i was there wanting to taste it, just that one bite. great, excelent, awesome poem... Love your friend, Destiny
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:45:00 PM
Luv this one Travis and the sweet emotion mixed with passion in your lines make it an exquisite write... I luv writing about luv and passion myself as u will see on my list of poetry.. also have a new blog for favorites on Fridays posted ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 4/29/2010 5:17:00 PM
Nice Travis. Really describes your feelings. Thank you for your omments on my poem. Joyce
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