Just One Bite

just one bite of you
like a fine fruit that fills
my mouth with sensation

tease my taste buds 
sugary juice of love
you are my passion 
my greatest pleasure

you are the candy that 
melts in my mouth
not in my hands

like a strawberry dipped
in milk chocolate
a combination of flavors
that sears my lips
a tantalizing treat

come be my fruit of passion
my candy that pleases 
these flames aching
for just one bite of you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Smalling Avatar
September 30, 2010 at 5:37 AM
Holding your theme through several changing, but related metaphors is the gem here. Good write.
A   Avatar
May 6, 2010 at 3:24 AM
good morning, what a tasty read, love it,..p.d.
Green Avatar
April 30, 2010 at 7:55 AM
Got me hungry! Very nice, Travis!
Orschell Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 6:47 PM
claps...oh wait you can't see that can you? great poem. i felt like i was there wanting to taste it, just that one bite. great, excelent, awesome poem... Love your friend, Destiny
Sweetheart Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:45 PM
Luv this one Travis and the sweet emotion mixed with passion in your lines make it an exquisite write... I luv writing about luv and passion myself as u will see on my list of poetry.. also have a new blog for favorites on Fridays posted ..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Johnson Avatar
April 29, 2010 at 5:17 PM
Nice Travis. Really describes your feelings. Thank you for your omments on my poem. Joyce
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