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Where do you want to be, Right here right now, today, What do you choose to see, Are you afraid to say, When will you take the chance, To take your bow, dance, Among with the wannabe’s Or the unjust who seek peace Maybe to the lost and found, Where nothingness abounds, Go to find billionaires, Floating with millionaires In cyber space, Want to begin the race Buy away boredom, Confused is this freedom, Do you envy this, To be hers or his, What, might just as well, Go to hell, Re-adjust your chains, Let go of all the pain, Find what you need to do, Does that mean poor, Poor of what, finance Spirit or soul, Are you of many,or few, Who lay on the floor, And suffer not knowing why Trying to sleep but cry, Find the celestial sky, For you must do or die, Try not to be a part Of either, Both poles are far apart Of longing to be, Afraid to seek or see.

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Date: 8/1/2021 2:53:00 PM
So many wonderful lines, what stood out to me is 'Maybe to the lost and found, Where nothingness abounds,' when we have the courage to really see, then transformation can begin~
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Date: 8/1/2021 9:55:00 AM
Hi Sis! Artfully done, into a rose of a Poem! Panagiota xx
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Date: 7/31/2021 10:46:00 AM
Well written Jennifer. I find it very thought provoking too. Thanks for sharing :)
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Date: 7/29/2021 9:25:00 AM
Jennifer, I hope you are doing well. Your poems always brings life to breath. Great write.
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Date: 7/28/2021 4:30:00 PM
Is life worthwhile? It is when i'm reading poetry as good as this. So many wondrous concepts floating through an amazing mind. Hope you are well Jennifer.
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Date: 7/27/2021 12:25:00 PM
WoW! Jennifer, You have penned such a well-written thought provoking write. It was well-executed:-)Alexis
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Date: 7/26/2021 5:44:00 PM
good ideas in this poem, and great flow, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/25/2021 3:25:00 PM
Love the flow of your free verse, Jen. A thought-provoking piece to ponder. Love ~ Mala
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Date: 7/25/2021 5:26:00 AM
- A thought-provoking writing, dear Jenny - Great writing :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/24/2021 3:25:00 PM
Hello Jennifer, a poem with plenty of thoughts to ponder. Blessings my friend.
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Date: 7/24/2021 2:08:00 PM
Jennifer, 'Both poles are far apart' has an attraction. With a needle direction poem pointing, in excellent navigation. -Richard
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Date: 7/24/2021 1:57:00 PM
Nice pen Jennifer, with good rhyme and flow, a really strong piece. Hope all's well with you, hugs and blessings, Gordon
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Date: 7/24/2021 1:12:00 PM
A very thought provoking verse Jennifer, plenty to think about. Hope your weekend is going well. Tom
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