Just Like You

I can't pop my gum when I speak
 I was born without that gene
I don't show the fullness of my hips through the tight fit of my jeans
 I like breathing
I don't accentuate my words with a finger cutting through the air
 My meaning still comes through
I may not act like you, walk like you or talk like you
 I am still a Black Woman
We share the same passion and pain
 Our mothers and grandmothers gave us our sass
Our fathers and grandfathers gave us our strength
I may not be just like you but I am you
 A Black Woman
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Hilliker Avatar
October 17, 2010 at 4:35 PM
The power of your womenhood permeates through your writing. Nicely done.
White Avatar
October 2, 2010 at 6:45 AM
love it. Love your take on this
Segal Avatar
October 1, 2010 at 4:54 PM
A beautiful statement, thank you for your kind comment, follow your dreams! love Simone
Kendrick Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 3:11 PM
Women of all races face some of the same feelings, emotions, hopes, loves, and expectations from life for us and our families..I am glad that I chose this one to read today..Sara
K. Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 9:29 AM
This sure speaks volumes! I really loved the conviction in this write of yours, Monica :) -- nikko :)
Johnson Avatar
September 18, 2010 at 10:20 AM
Very nice Monica. Love, Joyce
Neels Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 2:21 AM
Beautiful and powerful write Monica.. Awesome!!
Hall Mad Poet Avatar
September 15, 2010 at 4:35 PM
I... think... I'm in love.... with you :-) powerful write girlfriend.
Davis Avatar
September 13, 2010 at 6:29 PM
I like this one. It reminds me of someone I knew.
Callandret Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 5:37 PM
I love it deep, and well spoking:)
Keys Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 3:15 PM
i like your strength, well stated, thank you, chuck
A   Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 1:47 PM
lovely write with strong words, love this one..P.D.
Falotico Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 6:02 AM
Well said!!! please read my poem "What My Eyes See Now" I think you will like it...always Michael
Blakeley Avatar
September 12, 2010 at 4:13 AM
Beautiful. I really enjoyed the diginity of this.
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