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Just Like Me

As I look back upon my life
And what it might have been
And see how fast it all past by 
It’s almost like a dream

It started with much promise
Though  it had it’s share of bumps
And now I sit here reminiscing
With my bruises  scars and lumps

I  could have been a comic
But I wasn’t very funny
I could have been a playboy
But I never had the money

I could have been a rockstar
But I couldn’t sing a note 
Might have been the president
But i never got a vote

Could have been a carpenter
But I never had the tools 
Could  have  a banker
But I never liked those fools

Could have been a model 
But i never had the looks
Could have been a teacher
But i never read those books

Could have been a moviestar
But   i never  learned to act
But what I am is all i am
And baby that’s a fact

The moral of the story
Is a simple as can be
Go and try be what you want 
Or you’ll end up just like me

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Most of us are afraid to fly
Because we fear we’ll fall
But better to try flying than
Continue to just crawl
So spread your  wings
 and take a chance 
Because life can be quite brief
And maybe all it ever took 
Was a little self belief

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




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Date: 3/5/2024 2:48:00 PM
Wow Thomas I absolutely love this poem, thank you muchly and take care. Warm Regards Sandra Doolan
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Thomas Flood
Date: 3/6/2024 4:10:00 PM
thank you Sandra and warm regards to you
Date: 3/5/2024 2:38:00 PM
Made me think. Also very well constructed poem.
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Thomas Flood
Date: 3/6/2024 4:10:00 PM
thank you Mark
Date: 3/5/2024 1:44:00 PM
Perfectly said! I can totally relate.
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Thomas Flood
Date: 3/6/2024 4:11:00 PM
thank you Diane
Date: 3/5/2024 8:01:00 AM
Sincere apologies don’t know why those questions marks came up in my comment.
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Date: 3/5/2024 5:18:00 AM
Thanks for the words of encouragement.
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Date: 3/4/2024 8:09:00 PM
A simple message , beautifully written. Fear prevents us from trying. ????
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Thomas Flood
Date: 3/6/2024 4:12:00 PM
thank you Zyrool
Date: 2/4/2021 9:07:00 PM
Nice to find this meaningful poem in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ love your powerful message. A FAVE for me
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Thomas Flood
Date: 2/24/2021 4:02:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words Line
Date: 10/22/2020 10:55:00 AM
Really enjoyed reading your poem.
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Thomas Flood
Date: 10/22/2020 11:14:00 AM
thank you Stephen
Date: 1/16/2020 8:24:00 PM
very very good writing, thomas. Metrical , smooth flowing and great message!
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Thomas Flood
Date: 1/17/2020 12:04:00 PM
thank you Andrea
Date: 11/18/2019 6:39:00 PM
You are quite a talented poet!
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Thomas Flood
Date: 11/19/2019 11:43:00 AM
thank you Hannah
Date: 10/27/2019 10:05:00 AM
thomas, So very nice a poem with just as good a moral message. Welcome. -Richard
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Thomas Flood
Date: 10/27/2019 2:21:00 PM
thank you Richard
Date: 8/28/2019 2:25:00 PM
Hello Thomas Flood, first of all welcome to Poetry Soup. You will enjoy your time here. For your first poem, you did very well. the best part of your poem for me is the last verse. Have a niceday my friend.
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Thomas Flood
Date: 8/29/2019 9:45:00 AM
thank you for the kind words Darlene

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