Just Like Me

As I look back upon my life
And what it might have been
And see how fast it all past by 
It’s almost like a dream

It started with much promise
Though  it had it’s share of bumps
And now I sit here reminiscing
With my bruises  scars and lumps

I  could have been a comic
But I wasn’t very funny
I could have been a playboy
But I never had the money

I could have been a rockstar
But I couldn’t sing a note 
Might have been the president
But i never got a vote

Could have been a carpenter
But I never had the tools 
Could  have  a banker
But I never liked those fools

Could have been a model 
But i never had the looks
Could have been a teacher
But i never read those books

Could have been a moviestar
But   i never  learned to act
But what I am is all i am
And baby that’s a fact

The moral of the story
Is a simple as can be
Go and try be what you want 
Or you’ll end up just like me

--

Most of us are afraid to fly
Because we fear we’ll fall
But better to try flying than
Continue to just crawl
So spread your  wings
 and take a chance 
Because life can be quite brief
And maybe all it ever took 
Was a little self belief
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Doolan Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 2:48 PM
Wow Thomas I absolutely love this poem, thank you muchly and take care. Warm Regards Sandra Doolan
Flood Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 4:10 PM
thank you Sandra and warm regards to you
Springer Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 2:38 PM
Made me think. Also very well constructed poem.
Flood Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 4:10 PM
thank you Mark
Perna Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 1:44 PM
Perfectly said! I can totally relate.
Flood Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 4:11 PM
thank you Diane
Gifford Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Sincere apologies don’t know why those questions marks came up in my comment.
Millan-Acosta Avatar
March 5, 2024 at 5:18 AM
Thanks for the words of encouragement.
Gifford Avatar
March 4, 2024 at 8:09 PM
A simple message , beautifully written. Fear prevents us from trying. ????
Flood Avatar
March 6, 2024 at 4:12 PM
thank you Zyrool
Gauthier Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 9:07 PM
Nice to find this meaningful poem in the 2020 PS Anthology ~ love your powerful message. A FAVE for me
Flood Avatar
February 24, 2021 at 4:02 PM
Thank you for your kind words Line
Mayne Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 10:55 AM
Really enjoyed reading your poem.
Flood Avatar
October 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM
thank you Stephen
Dietrich Avatar
January 16, 2020 at 8:24 PM
very very good writing, thomas. Metrical , smooth flowing and great message!
Flood Avatar
January 17, 2020 at 12:04 PM
thank you Andrea
Borke Avatar
November 18, 2019 at 6:39 PM
You are quite a talented poet!
Flood Avatar
November 19, 2019 at 11:43 AM
thank you Hannah
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October 27, 2019 at 10:05 AM
thomas, So very nice a poem with just as good a moral message. Welcome. -Richard
Flood Avatar
October 27, 2019 at 2:21 PM
thank you Richard
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August 28, 2019 at 2:25 PM
Hello Thomas Flood, first of all welcome to Poetry Soup. You will enjoy your time here. For your first poem, you did very well. the best part of your poem for me is the last verse. Have a niceday my friend.
Flood Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 9:45 AM
thank you for the kind words Darlene
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