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Just Like Alice

Sitting in the bathroom Heaving and crying, Gasping for air But you feel like there is no air to breathe Because you are being swallowed by an ocean of tears Falling from your eyes Just like Alice, Crying as tears fill the room You seem just like her Well you might as well be.. You feel as lost as her In this world of things That are so unexplainable But yet to everyone else Things seem so easy As you sit there With these thoughts running through your mind They seem to always be on the go Just like the White Rabbit Not wanting to be late But they always seem to be But these thoughts tend come later Not during the moment Always after Always running late... ~October, 3 2017~

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Date: 10/7/2017 1:19:00 AM
Pailey - Congratulations on your well-deserved win with this wonderful write - blessings and keep up the great work, my friend! :-)
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Date: 10/5/2017 10:22:00 AM
Im so happy for you babe! You are amazing :) Such an inspiration to me!!
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 10/5/2017 10:31:00 AM
Much love <3
Date: 10/5/2017 8:58:00 AM
Pailly, so beautifully sad, CONGRATULATIONS on your placement with this wonderful poem!
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Pailey Gordon
Date: 10/5/2017 10:31:00 AM
Thank you so much :)

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