Just Like a Butterfly

She is beautiful but elusive
    Just like a butterfly
Never quite touched but so desirable
Aloof as she walks past me


If approached too hastily, she flits away
     Just like a butterfly
Look as she runs away, her beauty follows 
Leaving me so longingly alone
 

I am aroused by her resplendent grandeur
     Just like a butterfly
Then, she smiles looking both elegant and exotic
Sensuously, she turns…were those wings?


The nectar of the gods courses within her
     Just like a butterfly
I reach to caress her cheek craving its velvet softness 
Yet, I am too late…she flutters from me.


Something calls harshly in the distance…
The alarm summons me from my dreams
My bed warmly cocoons but slowly releases me
    Just like a butterfly
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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June 2, 2015 at 11:32 PM
CAROL,,, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
Gulley Avatar
June 2, 2015 at 1:52 PM
A lovely butterfly poem, Carol. I enjoyed this write. Congrats on being featured this week.....Sharon G.
Torres Avatar
March 1, 2015 at 3:33 PM
Nice. I like the dream quality. Cool write, Carol Davis. Very cool. Like the butterfly.
Makama Avatar
February 4, 2015 at 11:14 AM
Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.
Allison Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 4:58 PM
This is absolutely delightful Carol. I adore the imagery - I loved the twist at the end - just a wonderful dream but oh what a dream:-) Hugs Jan xx a 7 from me:-)
Nance Avatar
February 2, 2015 at 8:34 AM
Nice write, the beauty and wonder of the butterfly, a dancer in the dreams, Hope you have wonderful waking hours Carol :)
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