Just Like a Butterfly

She is beautiful but elusive
    Just like a butterfly
Never quite touched but so desirable
Aloof as she walks past me


If approached too hastily, she flits away
     Just like a butterfly
Look as she runs away, her beauty follows 
Leaving me so longingly alone
 

I am aroused by her resplendent grandeur
     Just like a butterfly
Then, she smiles looking both elegant and exotic
Sensuously, she turns…were those wings?


The nectar of the gods courses within her
     Just like a butterfly
I reach to caress her cheek craving its velvet softness 
Yet, I am too late…she flutters from me.


Something calls harshly in the distance…
The alarm summons me from my dreams
My bed warmly cocoons but slowly releases me
    Just like a butterfly

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 6/2/2015 11:32:00 PM
CAROL,,, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love
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Date: 6/2/2015 1:52:00 PM
A lovely butterfly poem, Carol. I enjoyed this write. Congrats on being featured this week.....Sharon G.
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Date: 3/1/2015 3:33:00 PM
Nice. I like the dream quality. Cool write, Carol Davis. Very cool. Like the butterfly.
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Date: 2/4/2015 11:14:00 AM
Beautifully written with an explicit craft shown as obvious as the scorching sun. Great piece, a wonderful share and a blessed read.
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Date: 2/2/2015 4:58:00 PM
This is absolutely delightful Carol. I adore the imagery - I loved the twist at the end - just a wonderful dream but oh what a dream:-) Hugs Jan xx a 7 from me:-)
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Date: 2/2/2015 8:34:00 AM
Nice write, the beauty and wonder of the butterfly, a dancer in the dreams, Hope you have wonderful waking hours Carol :)
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