Just Last Hour

    Just last hour, an effortlessly blue sky 

    dared me to surmise that

    never again would chill winds whip

    up leaves from their quiet reveries

    and set admirers teeth

    a-shiver
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 2:41 PM
Hello Gershon, One day it is sunny and the next day it rains. The wind would blow the leqaves on a lawn that was raked. only to do over again. Weather changes. Enjoy your evening my ffrieend. /Darlene/
Greenhough Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 1:28 PM
Never believe a blue sky. They tend to change.
Babbit Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 7:54 AM
Even under blue, cloudless skies, that wind hustles and rustles the leaves, setting them free and I am chilled by the change.
Tor Avatar
November 12, 2024 at 2:42 AM
Let's hope your right my friend. If only blue skies would last forever. It is nice to be hopeful, sadly mother nature sets the rules. Does she have a mailing address we can send request, lol? Have a nice day my friend...and may you forever have blue skies...
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