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there were twenty-one, no,
it was only eight, or nine, no,
it was nearer to thirty-something
that exploded to the headlines

they were all soldiers and contractors
no, they were government officials and police,
- no, maybe it was vendors and washer women
no, it's believed, it was play-yard kids

there was a large explosion
no, was a hail of gunfire,
or reported assailants with machetes,
actually, it may have been bare hands and fists

the enemies haughtily claim responsibility
no, it was that other faction they think,
no, it might have been a crazed loner, no - 
no-one has claimed responsibility

relief and reporters are in route
more updates as events occur

© Goode Guy 2014-01-19
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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January 28, 2014 at 6:22 PM
Very intriguing -B. Maxine
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January 27, 2014 at 6:56 AM
interesting, Skat
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January 26, 2014 at 10:13 AM
Well written poem. Imagery was excellent. The word choice was good. Best wishes Linda
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